The Flip Side

Rookie (Conceived 31.07.06 / The Dark)

Comments about The Flip Side

  • Rosi Fousse (10/24/2012 5:30:00 PM)

    I think your good, just, you write differently than jack expects XD so.... Keep writing, wanna see some new stuff.

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  • Jack Aubrey (2/1/2007 3:42:00 AM)

    A mediocre so-called poet of no particular merit. His attempts at self-justification resemble those of criminals who claim their victims 'made them do it.' And no, I'm not his victim, and have not met him.

Pitch

Why I sigh is this goodbye,
we do not try farewell;
This goodbye is why I sigh,
my love I could not tell.

We make the choice but what's the cost
in dreams and hopes and choices lost;
Did we think or coin just toss
when moving to our end?

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