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My Mother loved this poem. the last few lines made her sad though. She would often comment that the speaker should have been closer to Heaven the older he became.
You show some promise, but the archaic language lets you down. Try to read some good contemporary poets and expand your thoughts without the restriction of form.
what a meaningful poem that taught me the meaning of sacrifice, the woman decided to make a song of her pains to make the rich happy although the song will never reach the rich
A Pathetic BalladBen Battle was a soldier bold,And used to war's alarms;But a cannon-ball took off his legs,So he laid down his arms.Now as they bore him off the field,Said he, 'Let others shoot;