Tony Miller


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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (12/16/2012 1:06:00 PM)

    Tony Miller, ..in my ideas, you've got a perfect soul man. i just have found your great poetry.
    bless. hope to see your progressing all the time.
    Ellias Anderson.

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  • Kris Templin (10/11/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    you write very well Tony
    keep up the gr8 work thanks for sharing.

  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (6/18/2009 9:38:00 PM)

    You have good ideas but you need to expand a bit.Don't be afraid to use words-that's your voice in your poems..poetry is more than just feelings and images..it's reaching inward so you can grab the reader's attention outwardly...watch your punctuation and spelling...mostly remember we each have our own unique voice and preferences.Good luck! ! ! !

1. Fading Utopias

She absorbed more smoke than top paper walls.
With that bleach-blonde hair,
golden as roving suns, she could
draw it down, the smoke, and the dreams
the smoke inspired.

Upstairs in her bedroom in her parents house
we became the smoke, rising human mist,
turned whiter and loftier, drifted upward

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