Valerie Anderson

Rookie (Feburary 14th / Dallas)

Comments about Valerie Anderson

  • Chuck Hurley (10/11/2005 5:32:00 PM)

    I enjoyed ur poems and if you do also then that is all that matters. The rest like value, use of words and phrase's and clarity will change for you as you gain more experience in life and at ur age you have many years to build up in your mind what you want ur poetry to express. ur at the age when relationships should be enjoyed and do not rush into a comittment that after a few years is no turning out as you expected. Eighteen is a wonder age and you will have many relationships as you go thru life and ur perspective will change as you change. Get ur education first so you can take care of yourself and be a discriment about life and what you want from it. Good luck and is it poet for both genders or do we recognize the word poetess.Chow Chuck

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  • Kylee Anderson (10/6/2005 2:37:00 PM)

    I'm just hoping people will give me advice and tell me what I need to fix on my poems. And don't forget about telling me if they liked my poems or not.

I Was Wrong

I'm sorry to say this,
all through my heart.
How could things between us go such a miss?
I thought we would never be torn apart.

i thought you cared,
but I guess I was wrong.
My heart was aching for your love again,
throbbing and thronging.

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