Vijay Sai

Veteran Poet - 1,592 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Vijay Sai Poems

121. Flame Of The Forest 6/19/2013
122. Feminine Outrage 5/7/2013
123. Paradise Lost 6/13/2009
124. Crying Cactus 1/14/2010
125. An Optimistic View 6/20/2009
126. Eternal Bird 8/5/2009
127. Beautiful Bougainvillea 5/22/2010
128. A Desperate Cry 7/15/2009

Comments about Vijay Sai

  • Mary Frederick (6/10/2010 1:37:00 PM)

    Hi

    'The Art Of Life' is really very nice) and others are not bad as well
    i agree with Khilil Perry

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  • Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee (6/9/2010 5:27:00 PM)

    About Beautiful Bougainvillea

    In this poem the poet shows that he is able to produce images successfully and then after setting all things correctly to disturb the pictures. Here the poet expresses a personal experience of him about the plant and its dangerous behavior in the dark. But the ending is full of doubt and it shows that the narrator is in doubt bout the plant. I feel that if the writer used ' cat' instead of 'Kitty' it would be more effective.

  • Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee (6/9/2010 5:22:00 PM)

    Hi dear Vijay
    These are just my understanding. I always try to point to the problems and you can find them helpful or useless to make your poems better.
    The poet knows the formal properties of sounds and enjoyed it. The title has the potential to move beyond the surface of this poem. One respectable idea behind this poem is that it has a critical viewpoint towards the world around us and the poet's sensitivity for the world and its inhabitants but I think the following issues are worth paying attention. This poem enjoys the crisis theory of writing. We get shocked after the peaceful pictures depicted of the birds and we wait for a shocking event. It really happened but I think the tone of the poet's voice should be changed if he wanted to show the disruption and breaking of that peaceful life. I think the poet could have used a tougher sound rather than SSS... in the remaining part of the poem to have the most efficient impact. Another point is that all things are told or reported naturally especially when the poet said: ' let’s Stop them perish and
    See them safe and secure! 'or ' Spill of oils' if I were in your place I may have used some metaphors to express the same thing but not directly.
    Another point is that a poem should have composition or orchestration. By this I mean when we use an item in the beginning of a poem, that item should have an impact in the end of the poem. But here the poet didn't make any use of their hunting behavior when describing the peaceful life of seagulls. Poetry is not just about alliteration but the effect of it on the audience and I think that when you want to show the tough reality of the situation your linguistic performance should not be the same as showing the peace of their lives.
    Seyyed bagher Mirshojaee

  • Bhupender Swarnakar (5/31/2010 12:56:00 AM)

    hi vijay ur poems gain right 2 b appreciate.they r wonderful musem of words

  • Ramin Chaman Ramin Chaman (10/1/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    Hi Vijay

    I read some of your poems.
    And yes..I think mask poem is best song.

    because it's full of metaphor and Zonate..

    well done...

  • Lycko Chizo (7/25/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    Such a good poet. With a God given talent. I'm envy actually. I hope I can write as good as he. Haha.! : -)

  • Khilil Perry Khilil Perry (7/6/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    I like poem i think they are cool you should write a book.

Best Poem of Vijay Sai

A Desperate Cry

God's creation
Blessed to be born in this world
We all may feel that's the truth
Until I read this-
An abandoned baby
Malnourished, hardly an year old
Famine struck
Skin and bone
No food to feed
No water to have
Stranded alone in barren land
Helpless eyes staring straight
Standing legs more like a bamboo stick
Cerebral neurons popping out
Veins struggling to carry weak blood
Oh God! Nothing more I can add…
My heart is not strong enough
To read the rest-
A vampire vulture
Sitting beside and
Looking eager to end its hunger!
I pray!...

Read the full of A Desperate Cry

Sensational Sachin

Sachin on song,
Blasting balls all along,
What else do you want,
Sit back and enjoy!
Scintillating stroke play!
Sizzling straight drives and stunning sweeps,
Cracking cover drives and cunning cut shots,
Pleasing pulls and lingering late cuts,
Feasty flicks and hefty hooks,

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