winter lees

Rookie (Janurary,5 / clinton missouri)

winter lees Poems

1. God Blessed America 5/28/2005
2. Good And Bad 4/16/2005

Comments about winter lees

  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (4/18/2005 4:23:00 AM)

    I assume that your first name is Winter and I want to be the first to welcome you to this website. I am a bit of a talent spotter and I can tell that you have 'it'.
    Now comes the phase of developing your 'craft' and that will come naturally, with you just practicing and allowing its natural progression.
    From what I have seen of your writing so far I think you will be an excellent poet and hope that you stick with this (as compared to soccer...) as this is you.
    Best wishes,

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Best Poem of winter lees

Good And Bad

i hear the clinging of
my moms old piggy bank

i hear the singing of my
bird jojo who died long ago

i hear the rapping of my brothers
cds they annoys me oh so much

i hear the sirens for my dad
that makes me sad but glad

i hear the sound of my dads
hands smaking agenst my face

i hear the ripping wrapping of my mom
making gift for my friends and family

all these memories are
both good and bad

some make me happy and some make me sad

think of things from the past memories will always last

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