yoonoos peerbocus

Gold Star - 25,830 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

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  • The Poet Poet The Poet Poet (9/5/2017 5:00:00 PM)

    Oh Gardner Poet

    Your poetry is like sugar
    on autumn leaves
    no need to crush them
    for the sweet fragrance

    you are a poet of class indeed
    in the list of best 500 poems
    when will we achieve or attain
    such a moment
    of holding hands in the garden of roses
    where I hope to be one
    saught after by everyone

    a blue bird of narcissism
    an egoist poet
    off the cuff in the desert

    none yet knew
    but my what a poet are you
    but why only 25 poems
    I have inked many a thousands
    many read a non poet me

    you are an eagle flying
    okay soaring
    come abide with me
    I am a poet of style free
    a Niagara I may one day be

    till that happens
    can we meet across the Internet at least

    You are a POET TREE
    I'd like to bask in the shadow of thee
    will you let me
    O poet gracious
    how much indebted I shall be
    to all those thereafter read me

    You would I suppose...

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  • Ruta Mohapatra Ruta Mohapatra (9/5/2017 2:27:00 AM)

    Liked Á child's Reflection' better than the 'Gardener'. Very touching. Very true about this world full of conflict.

  • Roxanne Dubarry (8/3/2017 6:17:00 PM)

    I read your poem, A Hint of what Is Beautiful. Nurses attending the needs of the wounded is beautiful. You are right about the condition of the world today. We do have an option. Why not pray to God?

  • Christina Simmons Christina Simmons (7/21/2017 10:14:00 PM)

    It's the way you tell 'em. Definitely have the knack!

  • Sayyeda Insha  Rani Sayyeda Insha Rani (7/17/2017 8:46:00 AM)

    Sir plz check my poem on this site and find my mistakes.

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:20:00 PM)

    actually i believe it is POEMHUNTER'S ERROR. it seems they have put butterfly comments on this page for comments about the author!

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:18:00 PM)

    the last two comments were meant to go on the page for the poet's poem Butterfly. it is my error. bri: (

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:08:00 PM)

    PH changed my last comment a little bit. where the last comment now says a., please read as a period.

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:06:00 PM)

    to read and continue with commenting on this poem is a bit of a struggle for me. i can't understand how some readers seem to have no trouble with it. is it really my shortcomings? i DO have some, of course!

    check spelling of nourrish and the placement/use of a. where you might have wanted a comma.

    the poem seems to be about a butterfly, flowers etc., but i'm pretty sure it is symbolic in some places. i don't
    'do well' with reading symbolism.

    the wording, for me, is a bit too complex i think. if i had more computer time i might spend more of it on this poem.

    let me take a quick look at one more poem.

    bri :)

  • Sylvia Frances Chan Sylvia Frances Chan (5/1/2017 9:47:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

Best Poem of yoonoos peerbocus

A Hint At What Is Beautiful?

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
napalm asphyxiated victims
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
and heart shuts out desire to let in

Read the full of A Hint At What Is Beautiful?

A Baby's View Of

I came as tomorrow
Swaddled in unawareness
To your warm womb
Without your choice
Or mine
Destined to up date
With time
Our human tree
But before love
Grew into flesh and words
What is unfinished creation-
A precipitation of blood
Became my transcendence.

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