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  • Kee Thampi (3/6/2006 2:17:00 AM)

    Mydear Joy,
    Lovable mission of life makes this poem

    Fighting through the sands
    Traversing the open lands

    Breathing harsh, drawing hot, fetid air
    Eyes scanning the lanscape for foes, trying to remain ever aware

    Ever vigilant, a constant presence
    Tho the danger level seems formality, keep watch with alll your senses

    Your specific surroundings will remain mystery
    Your duties I can only speculate, but I wish you to carry

    A special thing when you go.
    Me, my heart, my love and all that I know

    Perhaps my fears will be settted
    You are not near dangers' heart tho it still has me nettled

    But among the hellish, stinking rot,
    Inflamed by the sun, exposed skin raw from sand and grit, fear not

    Tho you may have little to occupy your time
    Aside from work or the bleached dunes you hope never to climb

    I stand with you, near you, inside you
    Gaurding what lies within, there's nothing else you have to do

  • Ulrike Gerbig (2/2/2006 8:57:00 AM)

    your poetry is angry, honest, sensual, moving, deep, dark, brave and beautiful.


  • Joy Vanderhelm (1/29/2006 7:05:00 PM)

    Well, since no one seems to want to leave a comment about me, I will. Joy, your poetry, sometimes amusing, sometimes sassy, sometimes dark, never ceases to amaze. There, that about sums it all up. Okay, I'm being silly again, oh well.

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