Zachary Rice

Rookie - 20 Points (02-01-1968 / Cleveland, OH)

Comments about Zachary Rice

  • Pearl Lilypad (10/19/2011 10:23:00 PM)

    This is not at all a boring poem. The speaker shows individuality by finding meaning in the inane; the dilema/meditation is artfully posed before conclusion. It's something like a syllogism. Not If/Therefore but IF/Nevertheless. The challenge to agree with the syllogisms whimsicality is both off-putting and engaging. Nice.

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Bureaucratic Chatter

There is another Language
that I can't speak or write
Though I know many people and friends
who are fluent

It's Bureaucratic chatter
and ones and zeros
it's quiet wanting
with no desperation on their face

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