“If blood is tested by tiger” the legend says
It will become deadly hunter
Attack human being live stocks
It will become matter of game joke
Same way if person has tested woman
It shall be unbearable situation
He will go out for lust and try
The woman then becomes simple toy
In both the cases it is proven formula
Person finds daily new agenda
Goes for hunt and aims at new target
The innocent girls fall in trap
The wild animal can be caged
But what about young and aged
The vultures are out in many forms
Who will take care and inform?
Let us not become habitual
The bad habits sometimes remain not casual
They surface with strong urge
It will be then difficult to purge
The war mongers are of same breed
They have money and blood greet
They want to keep areas under check and boiling
It gives them immense pleasure with smiling
good writing sir, I like it. Let us not become habitual, thanks.
Lisa Lombardi likes this. Lisa Lombardi Let us not become habitual The bad habits sometimes remain not casual They surface with strong urge It will be then difficult to purge... Nice! ! ! 4 mins · Unlike · 1
No flow Clint Miller18 minutes ago Too many grammatical errors and there is no flow. The analogies are ok. Give it some structure.
:) Aspen-Skye Lee17 minutes ago This is pretty good. Took me personally to understand what it was about -forgot to read title- then I figured it out through the poem. ^_^ Comment +1
You seem like a wise person. Someone who has experienced both sides of many cases. I like this. 9 hours ago by lydia molinaro to The war mongers
Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez, Shujat Ahmad 2 secs · Unlike · 1
Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1
Brilliant! Paul Woodward15 minutes ago I absolutely love this. Says so much and I love the word arrangement! Comment +1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
“If blood is tested by tiger” the legend says It will become deadly hunter