tracing own footprints
travels down the memories
countless errors seen
THE LEFT PAST FOOTPRINTS CARRY DOCUMENTS OF ERR PRESENT- RECTIFIER!
Wonderful senryu. Looking past will let us know what all we did.
Countless errors seen.....brilliant......thank u, dear friend....anjandev roy.
we laugh and smile on our fast a very interesting three line poem by you on looking back at memories and trying to figure out what was done in a manner which would be changed now
Life's journey! ! Problems to overcome! Memories of the past. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is indeed an objective portrayal. If we could become that discerning and honest so as to retract follies while screening our memories. Very thoughtful and closer to life.