Fumbling in the dark
Absence of her warmth
Safety thrown aside
Their rules you must abide
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Fumbling In The Dark
Fumbling in the dark
Absence of her warmth
Safety thrown aside
Their rules you must abide
'Till the day you part from them
the Two you will respect
Fear not becoming a shadow
for it befalls all who know
Though you look like one of them
you are still fumbling