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  • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:00:00 PM) Post reply

    Would some of you poets go and read a few of mine? I seem to be getting a lot of slack from a teacher that posts on the forum. I don't think mine are that bad. Thanks!

  • Emily Oldham (9/6/2008 1:04:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi can you lot comment on my new poems please?
    Thanks! :)
    Athena

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    • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:10:00 PM) Post reply

      I went and read some of your poems. I like the one, After the rain. Great use of words.

  • Dan Gregory (9/3/2008 4:35:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    hi, im new here anyone wanna read my poems and give me some tips?

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    • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:52:00 PM) Post reply

      Read your work and it is out of this world good! Keep it up! Remember if you start with a rhyme you must continue that way. Good Luck!

    • Linda Winchell (9/6/2008 4:45:00 PM) Post reply

      I will Dan. I'll email you my ideas if I have any. God Bless, Linda

  • Olumide Ayodele (9/3/2008 5:04:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hello! since the heart is not governed by earthly rules, why follow costumed rules such as rhymes, rhythms, feets while writing.it makes ones poem seem overdressed from my point of view.

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    • Tulsi Hanumanthu (9/21/2008 2:47:00 AM) Post reply

      But, don't you think that being 'overdressed' is much better than being 'underdressed' or 'naked'?

  • Prashant Dhawan (9/1/2008 1:40:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Rage

    ‘Rage’ an utterly disputed word in my mind
    Is rage anger or an inner force?
    Rage conquered my mind
    Rage is the only thing left in me now

    Rage can be felt by both soul and the body
    Rage dwells in the cave of failure
    Rage creates an abysm in your heart
    Rage cannot be tamed

    Rage is felt on losing
    Rage is felt on guilt
    Rage is felt on rejection
    Rage is felt due to competitor’s superiority

    I accommodated rage in my heart
    I accumulated my disappointments in it
    I now am a slave to this rage
    I have abetted this rage

    I have abided this rage for several years
    I have kept it in side me
    In the fear that this rage might hurt my dear ones
    But soon it will be released and will find another body to continue the rage

    Prashant’s Rage

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  • Existential Despair (8/31/2008 5:15:00 PM) Post reply

    Poesies are a chance for the heart to speak what it's been screaming from the inside

  • Meysam Koushafar (8/31/2008 11:16:00 AM) Post reply

    please give me your comment about my poems. thanks in advance.

  • Nagourta (8/30/2008 7:18:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey, I'm guessing some of you are also songwriters as well as poets.
    You probably just fiddle around a bit on a guitar or summat and just play songs for you. Well, I have created a site so that you fellows can be heard online. You can give me your songs, and/or you can listen to others. Just cheaply record your music into like a, microphone or something and then transfer it into a music file. Don't worry about the cheap quality or your voice, I want it to be lo-fi.
    here is my link, please sign in! http: //blackpillar.webs.com/
    copy paste it or something, you can't find it on google!

  • Nagourta (8/30/2008 7:08:00 PM) Post reply

    Read my newest, Perspectives.
    It classifies Upper optimism
    Lower optimism
    Upper pessimism
    Lower pessimism
    a philosophy of mine...

  • Emily Oldham (8/30/2008 7:08:00 AM) Post reply

    Could you please read and comment on a couple of my poems 'Hell' and 'The Spirit of the Wind'. Thanks, Athena :)

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