(8/12/2008 7:25:00 AM)
hi everyone......... i am a new visitor of this website......... I gathered a lot of information about poetry.........Searchable archive of online texts from a wide range of recognized poets, both historical and contemporary.
Virginia Treatment Centers
(8/12/2008 7:23:00 AM)
hi everyone......... i am a new visitor of this website......... I gathered a lot of information about poetry......Searchable archive of online texts from a wide range of recognized poets, both historical and contemporary.
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(8/12/2008 7:06:00 AM)
need people to comment on my poem 'who said talk no more of colors? ' constructive criticism is welcome
James Timothy Jarrett
(8/10/2008 3:07:00 PM)
He crafts the finest ever made
soft speakings of verse and prose
delicately hammered like finest gold
each fragile link formed and forged
by mind and heart with love and and woe
Words together joined in finest beauty
birth shimmering chains of of golden thought
with pauses hung 'tween glimmering links
like iridescent shimmering pearls
Deep hued gems dripped from tongue
dance in jeweled and sparkling splendor
to decorate this work of art
hammered from the wordsmith's heart
(8/9/2008 9:24:00 AM)
Check out my poems, they are one of a kind and you'll never be the same again.
James Timothy Jarrett
(8/8/2008 8:53:00 AM)
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I crawled from my bed
Unaware of time.
No concern of mine.
Fluffy pillows left behind.
I clutched my drink from the night stand.
My only thought,
It's still full, I think I'll take a pill.
Instead, I walk out of my comfy confines
Through the rooms I float.
Loving hand long since gone.
I approach my throne.
I sit and pour a cup of lukewarm coffee left behind.
Maybe this will help, I query in my mind.
I guess time tics by me silently and slowly.
I pick up a book, a flicker of thought, then away the thought flees.
All thoughts fade.
I sit and rock.
Dead eyes ahead, still with empty head.
I find myself once again in my bed.
Fluffy pillows beneath my head.
(8/4/2008 7:38:00 PM)
One way to improve ones' poetry is to exspand ones' vocabulary. Understanding their meanings and how to use them and spelling is important for sure. Wish this site had a spell check. Helps so we don't have to cont. go and edit them. You think you have all the flaws covered, and wammo! There is another blooper! LOL
(8/3/2008 11:35:00 AM)
hi all, was hoping that if u have the time you could check out my poems especially my new one that i posted today called 'When you round me' and leave a comment would be gratefull also comment on any other poems if u wish to do so would love the feedback thanks for your time.
(8/2/2008 8:46:00 PM)
Please stop by my profile and read some of my stuff, I love feedback so criticize me lol
Thank you all
(8/2/2008 8:22:00 AM)
I am attempting to combine writing verse using healing techniques with the framework of the poetry. My first attempt is found in my poem The Here and Now. I would be most grateful for any views. Greetings from Fay Slimm.