(6/23/2008 12:34:00 PM)
send to me some ways to improve my poetry.because im a young strugling poet.
(6/16/2008 11:55:00 PM)
Read the [[essay]] casually
Poet Bai Hua’s prose
Recalled the raw and bleak Huaihai Battle
Before (they went to) the battlefield, the leader asked
What did we die glorious for?
“For the democratic new China”
The youthful faces who answered, was childish and innocence
The glacial tears remained in my eyes but no dropped
That was a brutal and cruel campaign
Only less three boys can go back from ten
And now sixty years passed away quickly
Democracy just like the racism(prostitute)
Both of them were the key words at internet times（ in China)
Screened those martyrs’ soul
Screened these poet’ moral
2008年 05月 19日 星 期 一 17: 44
偶 读 [[随 笔 ]]
诗 人 白 桦 先 生 的 文 章
回 忆 寒 冷 的 淮 海 战 役
上 战 场 前 领 导 问
我 们 为 什 么 出 生 入 死
“为 了 民 zhu的 新 中 国 ”
一 张 张 年 轻 的 脸 纯 真 幼 稚
冷 泪 在 我 的 眼 圈 打 转
那 是 一 场 惨 烈 的 战 役
超 七 成 的 死 亡 率
如 今 一 个 甲 子 匆 匆
民 zhu与 ji女 一 样
皆 是 互 联 网 文 明 的 关 键 词
屏 蔽 了 烈 士 的 灵 魂
屏 蔽 了 诗 人 的 良 知
(6/16/2008 1:08:00 PM)
The sweet preetty when i looked
A flash be smile in the border
The face view to smell of rose
The red pomegranete is soft smile
White jasmine to blossom in the garden
The soft crytal to fall in the leaf
The glowing sun to sweep mind
The colour of rainbow to adorn flower
The smell of glowing in here was i suck
The smell of rose was i enjoyment in the picture
The sweet preetty i touch in delucion
The beautyfull preetty i speak to in the word
(6/6/2008 11:14:00 AM)
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How do I make my poem sounds good and meaningful? thanksReplies for this message:
(6/11/2008 3:26:00 PM)
You can use a real life experience, and personifications. There's no real way of actually writing a poem worth hearing. Just be creative! ! !
(6/9/2008 8:46:00 PM)
lol... use imagaries and symbols to evoke a better picture in yr poems... tat will help in some ways...
- Elizabeth Douglas (6/11/2008 3:26:00 PM) Post reply
(6/4/2008 8:32:00 AM)
GUYZ HELP! ! ! I 'VE A TITLE OF A POEM BUT CAN'T MAKE IT SOUND ITS SAY 'SYSTEM OF LOVE'
(6/2/2008 12:44:00 AM)
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i have a poem called 'Society's Mind'. i've always wanted to get the opinions of my well-educated peers online...so help me out a bit...thnx...its been a while...luvluv
(5/31/2008 12:58:00 AM)
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I find that writing a poem that you really feel, like sorrow after a funeral, joy after a wedding or anger from the news. When you get some sort of inspiration the words can just flow from you. Half the time I don't even really know what i write until after it is done and I reread it.Replies for this message:
(6/10/2008 7:12:00 PM)
That makes total sense. That's what a poem is... reaction to a certain emotion in the form of powerful words. It's not really a concious effort it is a subconscious action.
(6/4/2008 8:38:00 AM)
JA MNR CRAWFORD, Writing is not just taking a paper and write, you have to experience something first like other POET who the poem 'COME A BIRD WALKING' this poet leave her familly to live alone and o ... more
- Lacey Unknown (6/10/2008 7:12:00 PM) Post reply
(5/30/2008 3:35:00 PM)
please read: 'A Thirsty soul'... its new and full of truth.
(5/26/2008 11:00:00 PM)
There are no rules to writing poetry.
Like no way to feel, and difference in sight.
This world is small and blind..
Find the inside.. the truth.
What do you dream when you sleep?
(5/26/2008 1:05:00 PM)
Well, I always write a poet/poem/song(yes songs) while listening to music that suits the poet's title, it works fine for me