(12/23/2008 11:01:00 AM)
'Old Braided Rug'
I found an old hand made braided rug
at a thrifty store, the other day.
It was quite a dirty sight to see
with some of its edges frayde.
I bought it up and rushed it home!
to give this little rug, a gentle loving needed bath.
And when it was cleaned, there was seen
braided memories of someone's past.
One braided rope weaved into another
a child's pajamas or maybe a robe?
Then an old flour bag, 'Velvet Flour'
was the logo, in this rug they'd sewed.
Then what looked to be a small center piece
remnants of someone's wedding gown.
I think they placed it there on purpose
Sort of like this little rugs, jeweled crown.
Memories of someone's life
braided into this useful little rug.
To place in front of a sink or bed
giving where ever placed, a little braided hug.
I don't know if anyone still makes them
these journals of a persons past?
But this little braided rug is now mine to treasure
to be enjoyed as long as it will last.
(12/17/2008 5:41:00 PM)
I've posted some of my poems. I'm not sure if they're good or not and would love to hear how you react to them. I'd really appreciate your feedback. Thanks!
(12/13/2008 1:07:00 PM)
Hello fellow poets :) I could really use some feedback on my poems, good/bad anything.
So if you could please visit my page, read my poems, and comment them. It will be really appreciated. Thank you.
(12/11/2008 11:14:00 PM)
Hi every body,
Good morning. I have recently entered the arena with poems of which i am genuinely interested.However i would like to get properly trained in poem and fiction writing.Will some one please tell me of any books?
Love & Regards
(12/10/2008 2:29:00 PM)
Hey. I want 2 post a poem but i dnt no how. Can someone tel me how 2 submit 1. Thanks all
(12/7/2008 5:12:00 PM)
Hi i have been writting poetry since I was in grade 3. I have tons and tons of coutless writtings and I am very passionate, emotional and agressive writer. I am very eager to presue the world! Please tell me about publishing or the steps to publish a book! :) Thanks for your time :)
(12/5/2008 10:11:00 AM)
HI FRIENDS IN LITERATURE, ANYWAY AM A JUST A POET THAT NEEDS ENCOURAGEMENT FROM MENTORS. PEEKS AT MY POEMS AND FEEL THE GROOVE. MORE POWER TO YOUR ELBOWS.
(12/4/2008 3:25:00 PM)
Hi. Could people please put some comments and maybe rate my poems? It would be nice to get some feedback on my work. Thanks.
(12/4/2008 7:09:00 AM)
Hello everyone! I just started writing poetry and I think that there's something I'm missing that I'm probably not aware of. I would appreciate if any of you could give me comments about my poems, the style, the words and others. I am also very grateful to those who give out advices that could help improve my writing. Thanks!
(11/30/2008 6:32:00 AM)
iv only been writing about a month or two.
so would it be possible for anyone here to take some of ther valuable time to read some of my work and comment on it, and leave a rating if you like it enough, ecspeccialy 'yin and yang' and 'lesson to be learned' and 'little grey'.
thanking you all in advance