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  • Lan Yuham (6/16/2008 11:55:00 PM) Post reply

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    Read the [[essay]] casually
    Poet Bai Hua’s prose
    Recalled the raw and bleak Huaihai Battle
    Before (they went to) the battlefield, the leader asked
    What did we die glorious for?
    “For the democratic new China”
    The youthful faces who answered, was childish and innocence


    The glacial tears remained in my eyes but no dropped
    That was a brutal and cruel campaign
    Only less three boys can go back from ten

    And now sixty years passed away quickly
    Democracy just like the racism(prostitute)

    Both of them were the key words at internet times( in China)
    Screened those martyrs’ soul
    Screened these poet’ moral

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    2008年 05月 19日 星 期 一 17: 44
    偶 读 [[随 笔 ]]
    诗 人 白 桦 先 生 的 文 章
    回 忆 寒 冷 的 淮 海 战 役



    上 战 场 前   领 导 问
    我 们 为 什 么 出 生 入 死
    “为 了 民 zhu的 新 中 国 ”
    一 张 张 年 轻 的 脸   纯 真 幼 稚


    冷 泪 在 我 的 眼 圈 打 转
    那 是 一 场 惨 烈 的 战 役
    超 七 成 的 死 亡 率


    如 今 一 个 甲 子 匆 匆
    民 zhu与 ji女 一 样
    皆 是 互 联 网 文 明 的 关 键 词
      屏 蔽 了 烈 士 的 灵 魂
    屏 蔽 了 诗 人 的 良 知

  • Ongki Ndun (6/16/2008 1:08:00 PM) Post reply

    The sweet preetty when i looked
    A flash be smile in the border
    The face view to smell of rose
    The red pomegranete is soft smile

    White jasmine to blossom in the garden
    The soft crytal to fall in the leaf
    The glowing sun to sweep mind
    The colour of rainbow to adorn flower

    The smell of glowing in here was i suck
    The smell of rose was i enjoyment in the picture
    The sweet preetty i touch in delucion
    The beautyfull preetty i speak to in the word

  • Putra K (6/6/2008 11:14:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    How do I make my poem sounds good and meaningful? thanks

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    • Elizabeth Douglas (6/11/2008 3:26:00 PM) Post reply

      You can use a real life experience, and personifications. There's no real way of actually writing a poem worth hearing. Just be creative! ! !

    • Andre Chia (6/9/2008 8:46:00 PM) Post reply

      lol... use imagaries and symbols to evoke a better picture in yr poems... tat will help in some ways...

  • Mhebheru Mhlongo (6/4/2008 8:32:00 AM) Post reply

    GUYZ HELP! ! ! I 'VE A TITLE OF A POEM BUT CAN'T MAKE IT SOUND ITS SAY 'SYSTEM OF LOVE'

  • Kyle Hamp Rookie - 1st Stage (6/2/2008 12:44:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    i have a poem called 'Society's Mind'. i've always wanted to get the opinions of my well-educated peers online...so help me out a bit...thnx...its been a while...luvluv

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    • Mhebheru Mhlongo (6/4/2008 8:22:00 AM) Post reply

      SOCIETY' MIND THE LOVE OF GROUP, CAN GROW YOUNG BUT OF THEE IS ENTERNAL. IT IS FULL OF SOCIETY AND MIND OF COMPANIONS

  • Dillon Crawford Rookie - 1st Stage (5/31/2008 12:58:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    I find that writing a poem that you really feel, like sorrow after a funeral, joy after a wedding or anger from the news. When you get some sort of inspiration the words can just flow from you. Half the time I don't even really know what i write until after it is done and I reread it.

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    • Lacey Unknown (6/10/2008 7:12:00 PM) Post reply

      That makes total sense. That's what a poem is... reaction to a certain emotion in the form of powerful words. It's not really a concious effort it is a subconscious action.

    • Mhebheru Mhlongo (6/4/2008 8:38:00 AM) Post reply

      JA MNR CRAWFORD, Writing is not just taking a paper and write, you have to experience something first like other POET who the poem 'COME A BIRD WALKING' this poet leave her familly to live alone and o ... more

  • Csdb Kind Rookie - 1st Stage (5/30/2008 3:35:00 PM) Post reply

    please read: 'A Thirsty soul'... its new and full of truth.

  • Csdb Kind Rookie - 1st Stage (5/26/2008 11:00:00 PM) Post reply

    There are no rules to writing poetry.
    Like no way to feel, and difference in sight.
    This world is small and blind..
    Find the inside.. the truth.
    What do you dream when you sleep?

  • Yannick Hermans Rookie - 1st Stage (5/26/2008 1:05:00 PM) Post reply

    Well, I always write a poet/poem/song(yes songs) while listening to music that suits the poet's title, it works fine for me

  • Thandeka Best Rookie - 1st Stage (5/20/2008 5:26:00 PM) Post reply

    Can you please read my poems and tell me if you like them or what is missing. I am waiting to hear from you.

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