James Timothy Jarrett
(8/8/2008 8:53:00 AM)
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I crawled from my bed
Unaware of time.
No concern of mine.
Fluffy pillows left behind.
I clutched my drink from the night stand.
My only thought,
It's still full, I think I'll take a pill.
Instead, I walk out of my comfy confines
Through the rooms I float.
Loving hand long since gone.
I approach my throne.
I sit and pour a cup of lukewarm coffee left behind.
Maybe this will help, I query in my mind.
I guess time tics by me silently and slowly.
I pick up a book, a flicker of thought, then away the thought flees.
All thoughts fade.
I sit and rock.
Dead eyes ahead, still with empty head.
I find myself once again in my bed.
Fluffy pillows beneath my head.
(8/4/2008 7:38:00 PM)
One way to improve ones' poetry is to exspand ones' vocabulary. Understanding their meanings and how to use them and spelling is important for sure. Wish this site had a spell check. Helps so we don't have to cont. go and edit them. You think you have all the flaws covered, and wammo! There is another blooper! LOL
(8/3/2008 11:35:00 AM)
hi all, was hoping that if u have the time you could check out my poems especially my new one that i posted today called 'When you round me' and leave a comment would be gratefull also comment on any other poems if u wish to do so would love the feedback thanks for your time.
(8/2/2008 8:46:00 PM)
Please stop by my profile and read some of my stuff, I love feedback so criticize me lol
Thank you all
(8/2/2008 8:22:00 AM)
I am attempting to combine writing verse using healing techniques with the framework of the poetry. My first attempt is found in my poem The Here and Now. I would be most grateful for any views. Greetings from Fay Slimm.
(8/1/2008 11:49:00 PM)
I keep to myself under the heavy drone of vacationers.
But don't think for a moment -
I cease to sing.
(7/30/2008 5:05:00 PM)
Hey I'm new on this, I'd be glad if some of you have some time to rate or comment my poems, and constructive criticism serves me well too.
Whoever writes, I naturally check their stuff as well.
(7/29/2008 2:17:00 PM)
Hi to everyone out there.I am new to this poem thing but one poem i am very proud of is this Night Of Rising Moon.Come & see i convince anyone would like it.
(7/28/2008 8:29:00 PM)
hi, how do you deal with the inner struggles of a poet in deciding about the inclusion of that one last line which changes the whole shade or meaning of the poem? archana
(7/28/2008 4:30:00 PM)
hi everybody if u have the time could you please spare some and check out my poems and leave your comments and constructive criticism especially my poem 'Early Mornings' would be gratefull for any input.