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  • Karen LaRose (1/2/2008 11:20:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Hello everyone! I would like to further develop all of the poems I have posted on here, so please come read my poems and leave comments. Thank you all. Good night

  • Trade Martin (1/1/2008 8:28:00 AM) Post reply Stage


    At the precise moment……,
    The clock strikes twelve…..,
    In whatever time-zone……,
    You may live in……,
    I wish you fine health……,
    Happiness and success……,
    Along with precious love……,
    Our Lord has given……..,
    May all your dreams……,
    And fantasies come together……,
    In the forthcoming days……,
    Of two thousand and eight……,
    And let every decision……,
    That you create and formulate…….,
    Exceed the meaning of GREAT…..! ! !

    …….Trade Martin,2007.

    (Many friends who read this during the first five minutes of the NEW YEAR…,
    may get 15% off of their car insurance and also get ‘lucky’ if they go out……,
    drinkin’ at a local bar, but if they do, please make sure they use protection....,
    ......please be very careful) ......! ! !
    .........................................................Regards, Trade.

  • Csdb Kind (12/31/2007 9:52:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    the cage i once ran from now has me, ,
    overflowing from my hart.
    i belong..
    i am me

  • Ben Sparaco (12/30/2007 1:40:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    FeEl WhAt YoU HaVe DoNe To mE

    You can feel what you have done to me, once upon a night beneath a tree. I can hurt you now, what you have set upon to me, how foolishly i had began to flee. I can now turn back you scream to me is now a gentle chime. And to me all of this was once upon a time.

    Ben Sparaco

    the rest are at this url http: //

  • Alek Lenth (12/29/2007 6:49:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    E A Poe once stated that a long or epic poem was a contradiction. I am inclined to agree for many purposes in poetry...but I have a soft spot for prophetic and other kinds of long-Biblicalish-narrative...

    What are your aims for writing long poems? or on the other side for writing particularly short or medium-sized peoms?

  • ash a (12/28/2007 1:26:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Hello Everybady,

    This is payal here.i am new to this site.i just join it and i wrote some poems. if you like it then write comment for my poem.
    see my poems at this link:
    http: // show=poems


  • ash a (12/28/2007 1:25:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Hello Everybady,

    This is payal here.i am new to this site.i just join it and i wrote some poems. if you like it then write comment for my poem.


  • Linda Weischedel (12/27/2007 7:11:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    What I do when I am getting ready to start a poem,
    I act as though I were speaking to someone/others
    I like to write my words in a simple format,
    making it easy for the reader to understand what I am
    trying to express. I write about topics we all basically know of.
    I have always channeled my thoughts and emotions
    thru my poetry....meaning if there is something I need
    to say, but can't find the right way to say it,
    or I am feeling nervous to say it....
    I state it in a poem.
    Take it Lite,

  • Uchenna Shadrach Franklin (12/25/2007 9:25:00 AM) Post reply | Read 3 replies Stage

    I often have 'writers' block' these days(know what that means?) What solutions can anyone here profer?

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    • Uchenna Shadrach Franklin (12/29/2007 10:50:00 AM) Post reply Stage

      I like all the post we get in this room. I will also like to invite you all to veiw my writings and feel free to comment on them.

    • Csdb Kind (12/26/2007 10:33:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      i have a the salution, , , RUN, , , , i hate to run, , but go outside, . run (fast) and scream- hands in the air- your head up to the sky, and let the mind go, , ps; works best in the rai ... more

    • Alek Lenth (12/25/2007 8:32:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

      do things that will put a poetic vocabulary in your mind, maybe your words just need new forms... (basically just start reading, or painting, or looking at paintings, or reading about paintings, or ... more

  • Dave Sherratt (12/24/2007 6:19:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    hi y'all. my first time here. i just write what i feel.some bad experiences etc. but its fun its a hobby. couldnt do it as a career.too much pressure. sun great talent on this site.recommend fire escape by jennifer pryce. i find the more i do the longer they get.

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