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Writing Poetry

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  • Tamara Moir (12/27/2005 2:41:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey, I have been told that some of my poems are good, but I am still a bit doubtful as these people were my friends. Would it be possible to get some honest feedback on some of my poems? Thank-you in advance

  • Michael Voorhis (12/23/2005 10:45:00 PM) Post reply

    I was just wondering if someone could give me some criticism on my poem 'a blushed review.'

  • Laci Leblanc (12/23/2005 1:53:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I have written a couple of poems which send out a message to the reader: Mysteries in the Dark and The Wise Man. However, each have a completely different meaning. The Wise Man contains more of a lesson, while Mysteries in the Dark may be interpreted many different ways. I would sincerely appreciate it if I could recieve some feedback and a reader's interpretation and criticism towards these poems in particular. I am open to any suggestions on how to improve my writing. Thank You.

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    • Aldo Kraas (1/27/2007 12:08:00 AM) Post reply

      I think the next poem you should write should be called Mouse trap It was a movie Saving Private RYAN Doc It is a tv show with BIlly Ray Cyrus They would be poems

  • Lola Van Morrison (12/21/2005 4:22:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi all. I wrote a poem called 'she deserved more' can you please read it and comment what your thoughts are? Thanx ever so much xoxoxox

  • Damsel Mystique (12/18/2005 5:32:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hi people! im new here too. cool site :)

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    • Ernestine Northover (12/18/2005 3:48:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Hi Damsel, Welcome to PH. Hope you enjoy the friendliness here. One can get a bit addicted to this site. Ha! Will look up your poems soon. Nice to have you aboard. Love Ernestine XXX

  • Nathan Good (12/15/2005 1:44:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I have written several poems, some of which I have put on this site. I'm getting more into writing songs, but I'd like to keep up my poetry too. If anyone could give me some feedback/comments that'd be nice.
    (p.s. some of my poems are kinda corny, I know, I personally like Masked Me, and Musical Spring best)

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  • Sweetie Sarah<3 (12/10/2005 9:14:00 PM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    Hey, im kind of taking a vote...What is your favorite type of poetry? Message me if you want to vote! that would totally be awesome!

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    • Mary Nagy (1/2/2006 10:08:00 AM) Post reply

      I love rhyme.....but I'm learning to love free verse as much since being here.

    • Lola Van Morrison (12/18/2005 11:48:00 PM) Post reply

      Free Verse! ! !

    • Daniel Cook (12/13/2005 7:44:00 PM) Post reply

      i like free verse sorta but with rhyme and rythm...more like if you ahve ever seen deaf poetry on HBO

  • AZ mayu (12/10/2005 7:46:00 PM) Post reply

    Just wanted to say Hello! to everyone here. brand new member here. this is some great site that i just found out.

  • Michael Whitt (12/6/2005 4:41:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey I'm new to the site. check out my stuff tell me what ya think.

  • April Fung (12/2/2005 8:54:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello everyone. I'm new to poems. Recently I've written some and I really need someone to give comments so that I can improve. You know, being a newbie needs guidance. At this stage as an inexperienced writer, I am totally lost because I just don't know what is right or wrong. Can anyone help this newbie? Please kindly give me comments. Thanks.

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