Writing Poetry

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  • Rookie Laci Leblanc (12/23/2005 1:53:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    I have written a couple of poems which send out a message to the reader: Mysteries in the Dark and The Wise Man. However, each have a completely different meaning. The Wise Man contains more of a lesson, while Mysteries in the Dark may be interpreted many different ways. I would sincerely appreciate it if I could recieve some feedback and a reader's interpretation and criticism towards these poems in particular. I am open to any suggestions on how to improve my writing. Thank You.

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    • Rookie Aldo Kraas (1/27/2007 12:08:00 AM) Post reply

      I think the next poem you should write should be called Mouse trap It was a movie Saving Private RYAN Doc It is a tv show with BIlly Ray Cyrus They would be poems

  • Rookie Lola Van Morrison (12/21/2005 4:22:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi all. I wrote a poem called 'she deserved more' can you please read it and comment what your thoughts are? Thanx ever so much xoxoxox

  • Rookie Damsel Mystique (12/18/2005 5:32:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hi people! im new here too. cool site :)

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    • Rookie Ernestine Northover (12/18/2005 3:48:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Hi Damsel, Welcome to PH. Hope you enjoy the friendliness here. One can get a bit addicted to this site. Ha! Will look up your poems soon. Nice to have you aboard. Love Ernestine XXX

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nathan Good (12/15/2005 1:44:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I have written several poems, some of which I have put on this site. I'm getting more into writing songs, but I'd like to keep up my poetry too. If anyone could give me some feedback/comments that'd be nice.
    (p.s. some of my poems are kinda corny, I know, I personally like Masked Me, and Musical Spring best)

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  • Rookie Sweetie Sarah<3 (12/10/2005 9:14:00 PM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    Hey, im kind of taking a vote...What is your favorite type of poetry? Message me if you want to vote! that would totally be awesome!

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  • Rookie AZ mayu (12/10/2005 7:46:00 PM) Post reply

    Just wanted to say Hello! to everyone here. brand new member here. this is some great site that i just found out.

  • Rookie Michael Whitt (12/6/2005 4:41:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey I'm new to the site. check out my stuff tell me what ya think.

  • Rookie April Fung (12/2/2005 8:54:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello everyone. I'm new to poems. Recently I've written some and I really need someone to give comments so that I can improve. You know, being a newbie needs guidance. At this stage as an inexperienced writer, I am totally lost because I just don't know what is right or wrong. Can anyone help this newbie? Please kindly give me comments. Thanks.

  • Rookie Meredith Creek (11/26/2005 10:29:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    I just joined and I am not sure what I am supposed to do. I write poetry and don't have a lot of confidence in my work. I am always interested in ways to improve my poetry and what I can read for inspiration. Thanks, Meredith

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    • Rookie Aldo Kraas (1/27/2007 12:33:00 AM) Post reply

      Please go to Aldo Kraas And read his poems

    • Rookie Joseph Daly (11/27/2005 6:29:00 AM) Post reply

      Well just post your work Merideth. And welcome to PoHO. You should go into the discussion setion of the forum. Not many members use the rest of the other sections Regards Denis Joe

  • Rookie Andrew Philips (11/25/2005 5:11:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey, this is about my 'Awakening of Life' poem. I have gotten at least ten hits a day on it and noone has commented. If anyone who reads this would at least rate it, that would be very much appriciated.

    Andrew P.

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