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  • Allian Bern Fuentes (2/10/2013 3:09:00 AM) Post reply

    The Flag With The Wind

    This is just the beginning of without any end
    Just one step ahead when we got a sphere
    Just one tick of the clock as our hands on tie
    And though our words just simple may we get on high
    One must won't let go even though you feel a fire
    Cause every curse is the strength to get up and fly
    And if a whole number will be a fraction
    It could be a mixed number beyond many reasons

    When we reach the top put the flag with the wind
    There will be no blueprint be lost in sight
    This isn't what they call an infatuation
    Cause our love is a cancer we're drinking with one glass
    Let the door be revealed to open up our mind
    Let the warm to every cold with the weight of the heart

    Planets won't collide if they talk in one language
    The sun is at the center teaching us to keep tight
    And even though how far we are, we still can see its light
    If the star's age will stretch far its color will change
    But only death can stop him from buoying up in the sky

    So if you feel you get burst, feel the music of the past
    Bleed your veins to find out what's in your blood
    If you forgot the past dig deeper to your heart
    And let your instinct tells you who you are

  • Allian Bern Fuentes (2/10/2013 2:55:00 AM) Post reply

    please read my poems.. my inspiration is mike shinoda from linkin park

  • Jinny Kim (2/6/2013 7:10:00 PM) Post reply

    I have a new poem called Keep Calm and Carry On.
    Please try it out and read it! :)
    If you don't like it, that's okay too.

  • Mathew Lewis (2/5/2013 6:47:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I know that this makes me look like a stickler but this is a poetry site so please please please, anyone submitting a new poem, at least take the effort to put it through a spell check first. There are WAY too many poems I keep on coming across that have terrible spelling, grammar and syntax errors. I'm a terrible speller so I know how easy it is to make these mistakes but most of them can be easily rectified by simply typing the poem up on word or any similar word processing software first. Seriously guys. If you want to use language expressed through words to communicate you're thoughts to a wider public audience, then have the decency to treat that audience with some respect, not to mention the language your using in the first place.

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    • Jinny Kim (2/6/2013 7:14:00 PM) Post reply

      I totally agree with you. If you're going to write poetry, write it properly. With proper language. It might be a typo, but then that's why you are supposed to check it over. It's really annoying r ... more

  • Xavier Mulea (1/31/2013 4:35:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I meant how do you post poetry

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    • Titi Dale (2/1/2013 8:30:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Well if you mean submit, u just go to the poem settings, go to submit a new poem and write your poem and title! It's pretty simple really: -)

  • Xavier Mulea (1/31/2013 4:34:00 PM) Post reply

    I'm new here so, how do you write poetry?I have some good ones so, just wondering :)

  • Linda Neill Poet Digter (1/31/2013 3:11:00 PM) Post reply

    Blame it on poetry in motion

    Blame it on poetry emotion
    all words instigation
    Blame it on inspiration
    of dreams expectation

    Blame it on the moon’s intuition
    a song revolution
    Blame the soul’s exploration
    for framing creation

    Blame it on dreams’ perception
    or mind's investigation
    Blame my desire’s position
    Blame it on love’s perfection
    Blame my muse's suggestion
    these words in motion
    Copyright belongs to Linda Neill

  • Fabian Aryo (1/25/2013 7:57:00 PM) Post reply

    And give me some advice

  • Fabian Aryo (1/25/2013 7:56:00 PM) Post reply

    You feel so much pain....
    You have sense of anger inside you....
    You have desire to revenge....
    and it became a Tremendous Hatred....

    Rate my Poetry

  • Devin Rai (1/25/2013 12:30:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey, Fellow poets, I am Devin Rai, new to this site. I just submitted my poem, " My last five minutes" . It's about regrets and worries you have when your times comes. I hope you all will like it. And feel free to present your views on my poem. It'll will be of great help.

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