(7/2/2012 7:54:00 AM)
Hey everyone! So, I'm not really new to this site BUT, I am having some difficulty with my poems. It seems like the people that use to read all of my poems and have a lot of good things to say about them but lately, no one is reading them. If you are willing to read them and comment on them that would be great! ! :)
(6/30/2012 12:20:00 PM)
So everyone probably does this, but I'm new to this website and only have two of my poems up so far but I could really use some feedback. Just started writing a couple months ago and I absolutely love it was wondering what others thought. So if you have a minute please check them out. Thanks!
(6/29/2012 2:52:00 AM)
I know there is so many of these already but if there is people out there that are willing,
i am in the need for some creative criticism about my poetry. please check it out
(6/27/2012 7:22:00 PM)
to be a poet is to become a mere scribe to the muse, to listen to the Truth of Love without words and render that into words... thus one must first learn to listen without one's own thoughts in the way, to 'meditate'...
but in meditation one comes face to face with Love, becomes whole, faces one's god eventually, one-on-one... so it is as well to be ready to face one's shame at self which has betrayed Love in life, been unloving many times perhaps... face the muse with pride and the Truth one cannot deny will bring one to one's knees, the muse knows more about us than we freely admit even to ourselves...
this themn is the spirit of poetry and few are ready to face their god yet, so poets are not numerous on the earth... most folks never know the god of Love in life and put up with misery and emptiness in order to fit in with others doing the same, wearing the mask of sin from youth to death in THIS life [not that countless many will face God in the next life, but that few are ready to face down the many and all false authority of men in this life...
so a poet needs must want the Truth and to be free, and to Love all folks perfectly eventually, IN LIFE, a good, blissful life lived as one from inside, the life of saints and prophets... one can see that few are ready for this else this world would be happy and alive instead of misery and dying... but God will explain all to anyone who freely chooses to Love not follow the ways of the many with their masks...
so understand that poetry is a major challenge, a life commitment to Love of all, even those who foolishly call one enemy in their blindness to God...
(6/27/2012 4:51:00 AM)
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(6/26/2012 10:15:00 AM)
Hey, I'd appreciate it if anyone is interested in giving me input on my new poem, Unincorporated Insights. It's a really lengthy poem for me and, to date, it was the biggest challenge for me to write. Yet, I'm aware that isn't complete. I'm definitely in the mood for some constructive feedback on the beast. I know it's got some pretty arcane vocabulary, but I've got faith there's some people on this site willing to slug it out. :)
(6/23/2012 11:27:00 AM)
On a rainy night, I suddenly stained a paper with an ink and that is how my writing career kicked off to a full blast. Lots of poets have read my poems and I've always been given a thumbs-up. However, I want an international scrutinity of my poems but unfortunately, I've posted about 4 poems on this website and I haven't gotten even a comment.Please I would like someone to dropp by and read my poems...they are oipened to criticisms, comments and suggestions.I really want to become a better poet.Thanks
(6/23/2012 10:23:00 AM)
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I want to learn to make my poems sound better
(6/23/2012 2:17:00 AM)
Hi i just posted my first poem or note... i like to write sometimes, and i just decided to post them, please any opinion, suggestions or criticism are welcome, thank you all
(6/22/2012 7:49:00 AM)
hi, this is the first time i write a poem, hope everyone can comment on this, thanks so much (the inspiration is from H)
It is not a long time to see you then
Just long enough make me feel so strang
But inside that is not what I really mean
whether I am nervous what cha mind?
Wish we are alike at the first time smile
I was shy and you were high
Together like a butter-fly.