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  • Alexis ... (11/10/2012 12:58:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    Hello Fellow Poets,

    I invite you to Read and Comment honestly on my new poem " Caught In Distance" . Thank-you

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  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (11/6/2012 1:01:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    I need help making a poem that Is light and happy for change. I am Asking for any Insperation, because all my Ideas like to twist on me some how.
    My Idea so far goes,

    Lili fower flowers, candy, cake,
    oh how sweet they can be,
    but that beautifal angel
    oh how could it be,
    the art of sweet sesations,

    its sound great, but have lost all my aspirations!
    what should I do?

  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (11/6/2012 11:00:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Great! though you were not crummy. those words were beautifal. Definitly better than a turd in my oppinion. No offfense all you turds. :)

  • Jacob Rodgers (11/6/2012 12:25:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    I know it must be hard, to lose someone that you love,
    but remember that she's watching you, smiling from above,
    Life can be unhappy and have very bumpy paths,
    You must only focus on the good things otherwise it'll turn into a wrath,
    You are such an innocent girl, so sweet and so nice,
    I want you to stay happy, so here's a word of advice,
    When ever you are unhappy, I'm always here for you,
    I trust you with my life, and I know you do too,
    If you're feeling down, and don't know what to do,
    Go look in the mirror, and look at successful you,
    I try my best to keep you smiling, because it brightens up the Earth,
    It doesn't matter what it takes, because it is always worth, (it)
    The way you always shine, always makes my day,
    I'm sorry if this poem, is just a little bit gay,
    You must alway stay happy, and keep your head held high,
    Then life will be great, as it quickly flys by,
    As long as you are safe, and don't do silly things,
    Then you should be excited, for what life will bring,
    This poem is so crummy, because these are my own words,
    I reckon it would be better, if it was written by a turd.

    Sent it to her. :)

  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (11/5/2012 5:12:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    say something, like, take your time, smile a little, If you make your sun shine, even just a little, mabye you will find the sun inside the middle.
    or even though the rain keeps pouring, If you keep just a bright flame, mabye you will get enough, to scare away the pain.
    I hope it helps.

  • Jacob Rodgers (11/5/2012 3:07:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    I have come up with a poem, i don't think it's that good tho: /

    I know it must be hard, to lose someone that you love,
    but remember that she's watching you, smiling from above,
    Life can be unhappy and have very bumpy paths,
    You must only focus on the good things other it'll turn into a wrath,
    You are such an innocent girl, so sweet and so nice,
    I want you to stay happy, so here's a word of advice....

    I just can't think of anything else..

  • Renee Knox (11/5/2012 2:43:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    I need an idea about a very lonely poems but i dont see any

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  • Enebeli Ifeanyi (11/5/2012 2:27:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    To write a poem is quite not an easy thing especially if you don't have flare for it.

    To write, one must know what and what reasons for writing.

    Poem comes from the soul through the heart and down to the hand.

    To write try get an image or anything that words can describe exactly as it is.

    Continue later....

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    • Paul Mwenelupembe (11/6/2012 10:17:00 AM) Post reply Stage

      Besides, poetry is all about music and pictures; what I mean is that as a poet you need to build a vivid picture of what you are describing while you use tone which brings out light music. The picture ... more

  • Jacob Rodgers (11/4/2012 9:08:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Hey guys. I'm new here and I hope I'm posting in the right section.

    My bestfriend, she is incredible, she is amazing, she's everything I could ever ask her.
    I love her like anything else in the world and she knows that.
    I always write her cards and send her letters to make her really happy.
    Anyway, it's the time of the year where her mother passed away a few years back, shes really sad and I want to send her a poem.
    I'm really bad at poetry and that's why I want to find someone who can help me write a small poem letting her know about how hard it must be for her, how sorry i feel, how special she is to me and other nice stuff.

    I don't really know how these forums work but please, if you'd like to help me write something beautiful, please get in contact with me, some how.

    Thank you guys!

  • Yar Yar (11/1/2012 2:59:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Furor

    Locked in this room
    No window…no door
    Dark casts a shadow
    On the icy cold floor

    Search for the light
    Divine need to know
    Stand gazing forward
    Catch only a glow

    An old wooden box
    Centered…stands still
    Nailed down tightly
    Eyes must have will

    Time asks the question
    A month…maybe years
    Wonder the contents
    Rage...dreams or tears

    Sealed is sanity
    Afraid to begin
    Calm be the object
    Control what's within


    Sealed now forever
    Feared to be shown
    Wonder the contents
    Unleash the unknown

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