(8/1/2012 8:12:00 PM)
glad to be here after a long walk, vibes that tired feet and get head spinning, but give thanks i am here, Jamaican by birth, to Edna and Ezekiel, , married with 4 kids, , and a beautiful wife, , aylete, , presently living in the us, working out of the health services, , , poetry have always been my nourishment to wisdom and knowledge, have bath me and satisfied my soul to deep extreme, , over 35 years of divine vision putting pen to paper, have still never seems to amaze me the power of the spoken words, , yes it is true honest and the creative thoughts that flow freely through my head and is shared with genuine love to the masses..so it is with a sense of deep love and respect that i came and will always spit lines that will burn your soul to purity and a quiet place to rest, yes this is rue from aboukir stann, by ways of Clarendon and now us, ,
(7/30/2012 3:16:00 AM)
Hello friends. Have just started to contribute here. Invite you all to read my poems and express your opinions. Thanks to all. Indranil
Adam M. Snow
(7/27/2012 4:46:00 PM)
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Through the Eyes of the Untold Lore
Through these stained eyes, dark is all I see
yet I try to live, believing this is me.
But all I could do is place my heart on a page,
and watch it rot away with every age.
All I am through your eyes is a ghost,
whom you don't dare miss the most.
All you are through my eyes, is hopelessness;
but my words I write are my distress.
Peaking through my once soulless muse,
as my heart lies victim to your solemn abuse.
I live to be your puppet, nothing more
but I am a writer of many lore.
And as I dare write with missing heart,
it is with you whom my stories start.
-Adam M. Snow
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(7/24/2012 1:56:00 AM)
I've been writing for quite some time now. It was just a thing of leisure. Now I want to know if poems from the real life pull at heart strings. If not, what can I improve?
(7/23/2012 3:09:00 PM)
The visit (haïku)
One summer morning,
It is the joy of the sun,
I come back see you.
(7/23/2012 7:49:00 AM)
I would appreciate if u guys can cömment and vote on my poems, so as to really knw my stand.it helps you knw
(7/20/2012 2:37:00 PM)
could people read my poems
and tell me what you think about them
(7/19/2012 10:37:00 PM)
REACH FOR YOUR GOAL
PARTICIPATE IN ALL ACTIVITIES
EVERDAY WE TOGETHER MAKES IT BETTER
(7/15/2012 3:56:00 PM)
Hi all, just getting into this and recently posted my first attempt...any criticism is welcome. Scathing or otherwise.
(7/15/2012 3:01:00 PM)
In the twilight
raindrops stopped falling
color of the sky
of the final horizon
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