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  • Rookie - 24 Points Rue Palmer (8/1/2012 8:12:00 PM) Post reply
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    glad to be here after a long walk, vibes that tired feet and get head spinning, but give thanks i am here, Jamaican by birth, to Edna and Ezekiel, , married with 4 kids, , and a beautiful wife, , aylete, , presently living in the us, working out of the health services, , , poetry have always been my nourishment to wisdom and knowledge, have bath me and satisfied my soul to deep extreme, , over 35 years of divine vision putting pen to paper, have still never seems to amaze me the power of the spoken words, , yes it is true honest and the creative thoughts that flow freely through my head and is shared with genuine love to the masses..so it is with a sense of deep love and respect that i came and will always spit lines that will burn your soul to purity and a quiet place to rest, yes this is rue from aboukir stann, by ways of Clarendon and now us, ,

  • Rookie - 97 Points Indranil Bhaduri (7/30/2012 3:16:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello friends. Have just started to contribute here. Invite you all to read my poems and express your opinions. Thanks to all. Indranil

  • Rookie - 431 Points Adam M. Snow (7/27/2012 4:46:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

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    Through the Eyes of the Untold Lore

    Through these stained eyes, dark is all I see
    yet I try to live, believing this is me.
    But all I could do is place my heart on a page,
    and watch it rot away with every age.

    All I am through your eyes is a ghost,
    whom you don't dare miss the most.
    All you are through my eyes, is hopelessness;
    but my words I write are my distress.

    Peaking through my once soulless muse,
    as my heart lies victim to your solemn abuse.
    I live to be your puppet, nothing more
    but I am a writer of many lore.

    And as I dare write with missing heart,
    it is with you whom my stories start.

    -Adam M. Snow

    If you like this poem, please check out any of my other poems

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  • Rookie Ulveena Aitzaz (7/24/2012 1:56:00 AM) Post reply

    I've been writing for quite some time now. It was just a thing of leisure. Now I want to know if poems from the real life pull at heart strings. If not, what can I improve?

  • Rookie Hortensia Handy (7/23/2012 3:09:00 PM) Post reply

    The visit (haïku)

    One summer morning,
    It is the joy of the sun,
    I come back see you.


  • Rookie Ugoh Ifeanyi (7/23/2012 7:49:00 AM) Post reply

    I would appreciate if u guys can cömment and vote on my poems, so as to really knw my stand.it helps you knw

  • Rookie Michelle Mcneill (7/20/2012 2:37:00 PM) Post reply

    could people read my poems
    and tell me what you think about them

  • Rookie Leyxus Warren (7/19/2012 10:37:00 PM) Post reply


  • Rookie Nate Hawk (7/15/2012 3:56:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi all, just getting into this and recently posted my first attempt...any criticism is welcome. Scathing or otherwise.

  • Rookie Lars Reimers (7/15/2012 3:01:00 PM) Post reply

    In the twilight
    raindrops stopped falling

    color of the sky
    of the final horizon

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