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Abdul Sattar Male, 37, Pakistan (6/28/2005 9:21:00 PM)

Heart feels the grief -[br]
Eye Tears for relief --[br]
Mind thinks for decision -[br]
After having some mischief -[br]
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How to complete this poem? and what should be the title? Please respond as soon as possible.

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  • Sarah Elise (7/5/2005 7:15:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies Stage

    but it didnt last
    now its all in the past


    hows that sound?

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    • Abdul Sattar (7/14/2005 8:43:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      Good attempt thank you!

    • John Wittle (7/13/2005 4:26:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      I think she wanted 3 more lines, so I'd do something that rhymes with Grief and Relief for the last line. Kinda hard when you have an odd number of lines.

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