(3/3/2013 2:20:00 PM)
Never be happy with a first draft. Pu it away and return to it in a few days, few weeks or few months. [One of mine stayed in my head for 10 years before order prevailed]
Treat it like a fine gem - cut it, polish it until all the facets sparkle.
(3/3/2013 1:18:00 AM)
its obvious.. you should read it again and again after writing each stanza and omit the distracted part...
(3/1/2013 8:13:00 PM)
I have had a lot of turmoil in my life recently and haven't been able to write a thing. But inspiration will hit me again.
(2/28/2013 12:53:00 AM)
Emotions are just things that slow or cease our perception :) are you often in noisy areas when writing?Or have things been happening in your daily life that your mind can't stop floating to?Try to clear your mind and think of a situation you have been in that is also the subject of your poem. Then let your mind run free!
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- It's more of a song lyric.
Please let me know how I can improve it.
Changing words etc,
Thanks in advice!
The winter is ...