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Laci Leblanc Female, 24, United States (12/23/2005 1:53:00 PM)

I have written a couple of poems which send out a message to the reader: Mysteries in the Dark and The Wise Man. However, each have a completely different meaning. The Wise Man contains more of a lesson, while Mysteries in the Dark may be interpreted many different ways. I would sincerely appreciate it if I could recieve some feedback and a reader's interpretation and criticism towards these poems in particular. I am open to any suggestions on how to improve my writing. Thank You.

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  • Aldo Kraas (1/27/2007 12:08:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    I think the next poem you should write should be called Mouse trap
    It was a movie
    Saving Private RYAN
    Doc
    It is a tv show with BIlly Ray Cyrus
    They would be poems

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