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Mary Amrutha Mary Amrutha Female, 19, India (1/9/2014 6:29:00 AM)

I am not lost

My mind being empty
and it is hard to write something
from an empty mind.
Where did all the letters go?
where did all the words go?
what I can find inside me is nothing
but an empty soul

who stole the things
that I had in my mind,
I don't know!
but it is all gone,
that is what I thought
I thought it is gone for ever
but it is not.

I can,
I still can
write something
I can talk about things
which I thought that I'll never remember
I can still speak up my mind.
I still can write from my mind.
I am happy that I am not lost...
Mary Amrutha

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  • Doris Cornago Rookie - 1st Stage (1/9/2014 7:57:00 PM) Post reply

    I feel deeply for you, it seems to me you are about to get where you feared you are going. Turn around woman, and take hold of what you still can. If you want. Live your life the way you have imagined it worthwhile to be - and stop dallying about it.

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