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Mary Amrutha Mary Amrutha Female, 19, India (1/10/2014 10:46:00 PM)

Let the secret die with you

Never reveal a secret
that some one tells you
shoot yourself!
but don't reveal a secret

Never reveal something
that some one tells you
because trust once lost
is lost forever

Never share a secret
which can harm ones existence
what is the need in telling every one
something that some one tells you
because of their trust in you

shoot yourself!
but don't reveal a secret
Let the secret die with you...
Mary Amrutha

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Doris Cornago (1/14/2014 10:12:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi Mary. I believe likewise but would not go to such lengths as shooting myself. You have the right passion and conviction. Read on what Daniel Brick told Femme Feeble on writing poems, a little longish but very helpful for starting poets: http://www.poemhunter.com/forum/discussion.asp?forum=1001&message=1999700&page=1&un=4466.974

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