(1/14/2014 9:05:00 AM)
Sir, I appreciate your pointers to Femme Feeble a lot and would like to repost some acknowledging you for them. Particularly, I appreciate this affirmation: Second Guideline: Everything you write honestly has value. Why?Because you have value. What you say, write, gesture, shout, cry, whisper is Y-O-U. And if you are being honest to yourself and honest to others, your self-expression is true and good. I would also appreciate if you would look into my soul and grade it. I have started expressing myself poetry barely 2 months ago. A late bloomer and not very selective with words - but very true. Here is one view:
By: Doris Cornago
Befriended the man who granted me true
inspiration, shared visions of freedom
Together in bungee jump, or scale heavens
in delightfully stitched together balloon
Not a lover but more than a true friend.
Youth took my hand in sheer effervescence
We bought islands, reared dragons, gifted
Each other with new thoughts and more
Rarely day passes when thoughts trigger
A suffusing warmth all over, don't wonder.
Life's choices, live it with what you've got
Riches are vanity, kingdom is what eyes see
If God does not deem fit to give you more
thinking you need all, do you cease to adore?
Be grateful, such freedom in living your own.
Today I wake to a lambent sun, door's wide open
My blood beats to music in my heart, I'm alive
Laptop is open, downloading swiftly proceeds
Walked to the kitchen just a few steps beyond
Passed by the mirror, saw youth in a bungee jump.
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