(12/23/2009 9:30:00 PM)
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free form is a form of poetry where there is no wrong, i must say though if a free form poem does not spark from your heart then it is just words on paper.
(12/22/2009 6:43:00 PM)
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'The Same Damn Day'
I'm praying so fervently
That my life is beginning to ache
Due to a build up of lactic acid
In my faith.
When is metamorphisis?
How long til a change comes?
Give me reasons to panic,
Stars don't leave bed til morning's light:
Magnify the swelter of a sunny day.
I'm weary of the same sheets and pillows
That I die in every night anyhow.
I don't want to drink from 'my' coffee mug in the morning
After a shower with the same damn shampoo and conditioner again.
I need to die, but I need to live!
I want to live to see another day,
But I don't want to live in yet another day.
I have before given birth
To a new day, not tomorrow,
But to a new day
Where I was happy
But only dreaming...
Kyle S. Hamp
(12/21/2009 8:19:00 PM)
I, an unruly reincarnation whim, would love feedback on my poetry. You scratch... er... read mine, I'll read yours!
(11/24/2009 7:38:00 PM)
Hello, I'm new here, I write poems in spanish and english, but I never had anyone to share them with, I'm hoping I can do so here, and I would love for you guys to let me know if they are any good or not, thank you
(11/9/2009 10:19:00 PM)
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I an aspiring poet always needs to be criticized so if you may please do take a look at my poems.
(11/6/2009 8:10:00 AM)
I comment on poems. So if you would like to know what i think about one of your poems then send me the title. I'll read it and comment. Im on Monday-Friday from 9-11am. This is in the United States. Eastern standard time. A few things to remember though... I enjoy reading poems that rhyme, it's like candy to my mind. ALSO, dont't forget, a good poet takes criticism into consideration.
(11/5/2009 12:09:00 PM)
I comment on poems. So if you would like to know what i think about one of your poems then send me the title. I'll read it and comment. A few things to remember though... I enjoy reading poems that rhyme, it's like candy to my mind. ALSO, dont't forget, a good poet takes criticism into consideration.
(10/21/2009 5:39:00 PM)
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Free Form is an oxymoron. How can something be expressed freely if it has to have a particular form. The definition of Form is: the manner or style of arranging and coordinating parts for a pleasing or effective result. So in fact the verses at least need to be arranged so that they are pleasing. And Free: exempt or released from something specified that controls or restrains. So How can I be released to freely write my poetry if I have to do it in a manner or style that has effective and pleasing results? What if my intention is to rake my fingernail down some ones chalk board, which is how I write only with rhythm and rhyme, then I can’t call it Free Form? I will call it Free Verse instead.Replies for this message:
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(10/18/2009 12:07:00 PM)
umm.... hey im all new to this sight and i would like to invite people
to come read my poetry i have had a few people read them and i would love for more people to read them so i can get oppinions on what i should do better or what i should not do thank you i hope all of you have a wonderful day
sincerly your friend,
(10/17/2009 6:49:00 PM)
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Free Form...isn't that what is the basis for the whole reality we think we observe? A complete, without reasons presented, whole does it all, FREE - of no cost, (How do we pay for anything like the fish in the deep, or creatures roaming?) , form - within set designs or precepts that are followed, form that no one individual can say for certain why form is a guide....ahh but we speak of the pen and paper. It is here where the freedom of form mixes and mingles, drawing from all, missing nothing, as the ideas present themselve's as living forms of what we call literature, or poetry....that sometime gather in a form that seems free of rule or boundry, or lines of limitations. FREE FORM.
Where is the Form to write in the Free?
What are the Free?
Why even inquire?
Bless our pens and papers that they don't stop with their understanding that surpasses our complete understanding, bless the individual who lets the inkling of thought, feeling and emotions to emote in the sight of others, who they themselve's await this 'literature'.
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