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  • Bullion Grey (5/7/2009 7:10:00 PM) Post reply

    I walked over here_________________________X
    It was a short jaunt.
    Then I came back X____________________________
    Another perspective. I layed down steps _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
    but was unstatisfied.
    So I just smiled :) and called it a night.

  • Bullion Grey (4/26/2009 12:02:00 PM) Post reply

    this little dot is famous . it has appeared in so many writings and this little dot. never gets any credit I today salute the little dot we call period .

  • Bullion Grey (4/18/2009 9:41:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    This I don't know much is uncertain, lost in air of breath.
    Hence it continues to happen, even to swell, from cradle to passing of death.
    It seems unnatural, I might be mistaken, of this is possible see?
    But of the actual, matter-of-factual, it could be taken of that which lives in me.
    We seek happiness in all it's dress, and wonder why it isnt around, why we aren't crowned with all that accompanys it.
    I observe as remark, that it is somewhat stark, that we step in our own....

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  • Allison Bovard (4/17/2009 1:59:00 PM) Post reply

    please read my poems. comments are appreciated.

  • Bullion Grey (4/14/2009 5:43:00 PM) Post reply

    Is life mean't to be achievement? Is it mean't to be winning?
    Is life for getting wealthier? Is it mean't to give all I have away?
    Is life for fighting others? Is it for fighting self?
    Is life a story to be lived? Or is it a report to be followed?
    What could life be? What could life mean? Anything....I guess.
    Life is an acronym: Living In Full Expression: L.I.F.E.
    What expression will I be? Shall I express things of ugliness?
    Shall I express things of beauty? What shall it be for me?
    Could there be a definitive 'purpose' for every life?
    I think there is, as a matter of fact. I can see it clearly.
    Life is, in it's ultimate time, for growing into greater Awareness.

  • Bullion Grey (4/11/2009 7:54:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    What if we were all new? What if we all were the same, just seemed like we were different? What if we were all expressions of a single note in the universe?
    If we were, we would be united as one note, drifting in space, part of a glactic symphony, led by an air of misunderstanding - yet part of the Divine movement placed in moving forward toward a new thought of What or Who we are.

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (4/4/2009 12:33:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I just managed to write another freeform poem titled SPEAK OF LOVE.I know it's a little rough and needs some work just like my THE BUGS OF NATURE'S ECONOMIC PICTURE needed so I'm open to suggestions.Thank you.

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    • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (4/12/2009 1:09:00 PM) Post reply

      I revised my poem starting from the day I submitted the rough version here 4/3/09 and finalized it 4/10 just in time for Easter.Enjoy the philosophy and the ending.

  • Brandon w (3/2/2009 8:48:00 PM) Post reply

    so i am new to this and i only have one poem up i would greatly appreciate if everyone would read it and comment it.

  • Jason Peters (2/24/2009 8:02:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey I just signed up for this site and I was wondering if everyone can check out my poems and tell me how they are

  • James Ferguson (2/23/2009 12:55:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello all....New boy here.

    Not sure if i will even get a single comment
    but still, why do I feel i must
    I have posted my first ever poem online
    to your interpretation i trust

    I would really appreciate any feedback on 'consequence'. I have written other pieces in my 'pad' but I think i lack confidence in my ability to write. Do i write poems or lyrics or something else? i'm not sure.
    Why do i feel the need to fit into a box?

    Thanks for reading.....

    Tank Ferg

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