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  • Rookie the poet (10/3/2007 9:53:00 AM) Post reply
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    The Hardest Thing I’ll Ever Have To Do…

    “It’s the hardest thing I’ll ever have to do,
    To look deeply into your eyes,
    And tell you I don’t love you.”

    It’s the hardest thing I’ll ever have to do,
    To never return your calls,
    Pretending you don’t exist.

    It’s the hardest thing I’ll ever have to do,
    To turn around and walk away,
    Like I’ll never care about you.

    It’s the hardest thing I’ll ever have to do,
    To show no emotion,
    When you start to cry.

    It’s the hardest thing I’ll ever have to do,
    To stare at your shadow,
    While you start to leave me.

    It’s the hardest thing I’ll ever have to do,
    To take the path of a fool,
    But I guess it’s the best way…

    It’s the hardest thing I’ll ever have to do,
    Not telling you what you mean to me,
    If only you could see…

    That my hands are tied,
    I cannot flee,
    When my heart’s not free,
    We’re not meant to be…

  • Rookie Miss Mea Black Qat (9/25/2007 2:11:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hehe, hi everyone! I'm a noob to this site but I've been writing for a few years. One of my fears when I write is becoming insincere, digging for words to express something, a feeling I want to convey but not really experiencing. I have yet to post something you guys can read but I would like to know what could help me write without going all 'Echo Generation' and losing my own voice. Did you guys ever go through this? Did I even make sense?

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  • Rookie Alfie Mccann (9/22/2007 5:35:00 AM) Post reply

    http: //poemhunter.com/alfie-mccann/

  • Rookie Amity Willows (9/15/2007 10:53:00 PM) Post reply

    I recently wrote a few poems about destruction and what happens after, and I was wondering if anyone would give me some feedback on them? Maybe just tell me a couple ways I could improve them, or your opinion of them. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Here are the links to them:

    I recently wrote a few poems about destruction and what happens after, and I was wondering if anyone would give me some feedback on them? Maybe just tell me a couple ways I could improve them, or your opinion of them. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Here are the links to them:

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-willow-of-amity/

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/hope-130/

    Thanks!

  • Rookie daughter of a seafoam (9/13/2007 8:16:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey, everyone.. I would really love to improve my writing.. I hope you can comment or give suggestions for my poems. Just click this link. n_n http: //www.poemhunter.com/daughter-of-a-seafoam/poems/

  • Rookie Ayn Timmerman (9/6/2007 1:29:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I'm looking for a few people to read my poem 'The Horsewoman (For Ellen) '. I am considering submitting it to a publication, and any coments/ ratings would be greatly appreciated.
    Thanks!

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    • Rookie Kk Walrus (9/8/2007 1:47:00 PM) Post reply

      Hello Ayn, Would welcome the opportunity to read your poem 'The Horsewoman (For Ellen) .' walrus

  • Rookie Mad Scroach (8/17/2007 8:10:00 PM) Post reply

    Here is a link to my manuscript A Rare Dance Won With 8 Guineas:

    slowdancingsleepwalker.googlepages.com/araredancewonwith8guineas

    Please feel free to email me if you have any questions.

    Take care,

    Mad Scroach

  • Rookie Tired of Being Exploited (8/8/2007 5:57:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hello poem writing friends! I am currently writing a rather large experimental set of poems, the second of which is called [DENSITY]. I am requesting your readership on it and I want your gut reaction of emotion added as a comment. No it is not classical, it is pure raw energy stream of consciousness prose designed to evoke a sensation from the reader. I need to know how it affects YOU. I can take the abuse if you feel the need to lambaste the work, just please leave something... Thanks!

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    • Rookie Kk Walrus (9/8/2007 1:51:00 PM) Post reply

      Hello Jack, Your poetry sounds like it's right up my alley! I am more then willing to rip it to shit at your invitation...LOL Kidding, I can appreciate where you are coming from ;) walrus

  • Rookie Bryan Mahoney (7/30/2007 2:22:00 AM) Post reply

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/bryan-mahoney/

  • Rookie Emma Whelt (7/28/2007 8:31:00 AM) Post reply

    we all enter life the same way,
    we all leave life the same why,
    your life will only be as gd as you make it,
    if you cry and you dont smile,
    you'l be alone for quite a while,
    theres only so much comfort one person can give,
    theres only so much sympathy one person can give,
    you need to want the help to appreciate it,
    you need to help yourself,
    only when you love you self can you truely love another.

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