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  • Veteran Poet - 1,828 Points Clarence Prince (12/22/2012 9:18:00 AM) Post reply
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    Hello: Greetings to every poet here! whilst it's my pleasure wishing you all a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year; I'm also inviting you to take a little to look at my poems, especially " AGAIN! ! ! " Please feel free to comment on whichever one....! Thanks, may you all be blessed!

  • Rookie Sarah Mohyla (12/18/2012 4:25:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey everyone! I'm new on this site and I'd appreciate it if you could take a look at my poems and comment on and rate them! thx! !

  • Gold Star - 29,101 Points Gajanan Mishra (11/18/2012 9:07:00 AM) Post reply

    Poetry is nectar of life please give me poetry. Poet himself is full of love full of joy. And it is only poet who can knows love, the seeds of all existence.

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ruby Honeytip (11/15/2012 10:46:00 PM) Post reply

    Name change?

    A Booby Trap!

    She is not skin and bones
    Of insignificance.
    She is intelligent substance,
    And decency of character.
    She is womanly flesh
    Of hand felt proportions!
    She knows her way,
    And will hold your hand
    Until you safely find yours.
    There is no judgement in her compassion,
    Although, there is a giggle in her eyes.
    And a wiggle in her walk.
    Faith and love are the warmth
    In her nature.
    There is a nurturing heart
    Beating under the fullness of her breast....

    Did somebody say 'Breast'?

    The story ends there.

    Look closer

    © 2012

  • Rookie Maria Manias (11/14/2012 5:28:00 AM) Post reply

    Thank you Syed and Rodney for you comments on my poem, much appreciated!

  • Rookie Maria Manias (11/14/2012 4:37:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello fellow poets, I'm also new to this. I've submitted a couple of my poems, one of which is the following, I would love to have some feedback. Looking forward to hearing from you, Maria.

    The song

    You caght me by surprise
    With your clouded hazy notes
    Seeping through the crevices of hidden places
    Drifting in like gauzy smoke
    Until tears rose at last
    From that deeply flowing spring
    Whose source is in the darkest cave
    Where all my losses lie
    You softly prised them from me
    Those visions and those dreams
    Of words and smiles of eyes and warmth
    I marvelled at the freshness
    Of the blood you drew so easily
    With the softness of your sound
    Those long lost moments not gone
    But with me here and now
    and when you slowly drifted off
    Leaving what I felt still clear
    I lingerd in the aftertaste
    Of memories of promises
    To find my soul again

    Maria Manias

  • Rookie Daxiel Musundi (11/11/2012 3:55:00 AM) Post reply

    God will defend we like a guard he will stand
    looking left and right from the east he will descend,
    spread out your wings cause in heaven we will ascend,
    and never be afraid cause in love we shall dwell.

    a look from your eyes tell me whether you regret
    falling for a man whose heart is intent,
    whose looking for a future from a being whose contempt,
    much love and blessing creature you are like a saint.

    beauty from the heavens, tell me whether you melt
    if i take a bite from your body will you tell?

  • Rookie April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (11/6/2012 12:31:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey I'm new. I have got some poems that I would love people to read, critisisize, or coment if you like. They are realistic problems, and can be dark. So if you like poems about that they are open for interpertation. Thank you so much! I really hope you find time to read them! : D

  • Rookie - 39 Points Jetty J Newnham (11/3/2012 3:36:00 PM) Post reply

    Cold Coffee Dizzy Gilespie add some 'Tea' coool me

  • Rookie Joe Giuliani (10/23/2012 4:28:00 PM) Post reply


    Please note that my new book of poetry, " Dada Reborn: 21st Century Poems, " is now available on Amazon (Ebook) .

    These poems are intended for a mature liberal-minded audience.



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