(5/13/2010 11:18:00 PM)
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I am an English Major in University, I am a Sophomore. I think that you should use less punctuation; while it is good to have stops at some point poetry is not an essay. You will not get penalized for mechanics, when you use comma, after comma, after comma, to end lines it breaks the momentum you are building. Especially at the end when you are trying to convey urgency- read the poem out loud for every comma pause for `
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