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Sky Welch Sky Welch Female, 17, United States (4/12/2012 3:15:00 PM)

Sonnet 1: Secrets and death coincide!
For sooth! O secrets that keep life a drift
Livens death which brings pain to all of life
What secrecy that gives but hath no gift
Secrets to lies that make life full of strife
But man will cause pain upon the trusting
When truth be revealed pain shall rein through out
Secrets have no truth and death no sting
And animals have no secrets or doubt
Hidden from the world are conspiracies
Hidden by those who do great deeds
But fools they are to force tendencies
And make the lies that's to fester and feeds
Secrets lead to lies of death in the night
Death, secrets, lies give the world quite a fright.

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  • Gabhriel Londe (6/28/2012 2:45:00 PM) Post reply

    I thought this was the freeform forum??

  • M.L Bennett (4/15/2012 12:40:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Sky, this is very insightful and you have a wonderful handle on vocabulary. I honestly enjoyed pondering the meaning behind your words and interpreting what it meant to me.

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    • Sky Welch (7/27/2012 9:24:00 PM) Post reply

      Thank you it was a project for school. My english teacher didn't like it.

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