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T.j. Johnson T.j. Johnson Male, 26, United States (6/18/2012 10:27:00 PM)

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i really enjoyed your poem. i thought is was beautifully composed, and i was able to put myself into it.

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  • Kelvin Karani (7/5/2012 6:02:00 AM) Post reply

    I also loved the poem...the image is good, very vivid...and I love the first line...the irony in it! " Deadened are my lively days" indeed! You can find me on ourwordsourvoices(dot) blogspot(dot) com. See you around.

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