(2/14/2013 8:38:00 PM)
Ummmmm....... This is an attractive poem but it's not free form. It has both rhyme and meter. Free form means no rhyme or meter. My favorite example of free verse is " Space. The final frontier. These are the voyages of the Starship Enterprise. Etc." You have undeniable talent as a writer, so keep writing. But don't be afraid to pick up a text book (or a book on poetic forms) along the way. You'll never regret it, and you owe it to yourself and other poets.
Comment of the Day
It is cold, everywhere.
The kind of cold many look forward to;
an occasion to don their warm fashions,