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Rachael Aislynn Musgrove Female, 16, United States (4/22/2013 2:24:00 PM)

THINKING

If to think is to kill a thought
and to sigh is to revive it.
Then why even try it?
I'd deny thinking, if it ment I'd spare a thought.
Perhaps this is all too much for you, my dear.
far too much to take in, I fear.

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  • Donnaj York (4/30/2013 9:11:00 PM) Post reply

    I believe that I must contradict
    To think a thought is to conceive it
    Conceiving of it, is its conception
    Conception facilitates its life
    But in effect initiates its strife……

    …..Its rivals may provoke annihilation
    So thinking again, I retract contradiction
    Its concept incites its life’s affliction
    In conclusion, my friend, I see its plight
    A thought’s birth can lead it to the knife

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