Treasure Island

Freeform Workshop

Workshop for poetry written in free forms.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones Thomas Vaughan Jones Male, 79, United Kingdom (3/9/2014 3:04:00 PM)

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Very minimalistic. Obviously the scansion has been affected by the brevity of this piece, but it carries the message clearly and shows some promise.

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