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Linda Winchell Female, 66, United States (12/23/2008 5:14:00 PM)

'A Finger In Your Nose'


You shouldn't put your finger
deep within your nose!
It really doesn't look too sheik!
and it's not where it should go!

Now if your digging for gold nuggets!
then your not digging where they're at!
Your fingers are suppose to do other things
like maybe tip or maybe tap?

Now when you place a digit there
deep where it can't be seen!
You may pull out a big surprise
something sticky and colored green!

Linda Winchell

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  • Vern Eaker (1/22/2009 6:58:00 AM) Post reply

    Actually I do intend to pick at this little booger you have so proudly displayed here for all to read, I though really enjoyed reading it as it has good flow and depth, (possibly to the first knuckle) alright I shall stop picking at it (the poem)
    very clean, obvious point (clear as the nose on your face) sorry I can't help myself.I like your style. keep writing.

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