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Amandamae =) (11/11/2009 11:46:00 AM) Post
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I comment on poems. So if you would like to know what i think about one of your poems then send me the title. I'll read it and comment. Im on Monday-Friday from 9-11am. This is in the United States. Eastern standard time. A few things to remember though... I enjoy reading poems that rhyme, it's like candy to my mind: -) ALSO, dont't forget, a good poet takes criticism into consideration.
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Robert E Hann (11/17/2009 1:43:00 AM) Post
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If you appreciate good rhyme perhaps you will read some of mine. Skunk's Birthday Party's one I think where Skunk is troubled by the stink. But soon he comes out of his fog and suggests Princess ... more
Kristen Gr (11/16/2009 4:22:00 PM) Post
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tell me what you think of them i hope you enjoy: ] be nice lol jk tell me the truth
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Margo Posh (11/9/2009 6:34:00 AM) Post
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Morning (from the UK)
Could you please read my Poems - Treading Water and What am I ....... thank you very much.
Margo.: -o
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Amandamae =) (11/6/2009 8:08:00 AM) Post
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I comment on poems. So if you would like to know what i think about one of your poems then send me the title. I'll read it and comment. Im on Monday-Friday from 9-11am. This is in the United States. Eastern standard time. A few things to remember though... I enjoy reading poems that rhyme, it's like candy to my mind. ALSO, dont't forget, a good poet takes criticism into consideration.
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Stephen Stirk (11/9/2009 2:16:00 PM) Post
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Also, don't forget. It is vital that 'a good poet' gives contructive and evaluated criticism
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Stephen Stirk (10/28/2009 12:20:00 PM) Post
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QUARANTINE
Wash your hands in cleansing gel
Before you pick your nose
Then scratch your knob
And end the job
By wiping on your clothes
Follow prickly matron’s code
And use the special spray
Preventing germs
Like anal worms
And flesh eating decay
Do you think it’s visitors
That spread the germs this way?
You have a laugh
I meant the staff
Who simply won’t obey
Germs are quarantined you see
Ensuring they don’t spread
And on the wards
Marauding hordes
Invade the beds instead
Now the germs are trapped inside
The wards and keen to tease
They work in pairs
Like legionnaires
And fondly spread disease
Cleaners come to fight the cause
With mop and H20
They lightly dust
Not really fussed
And help the germies grow
They greet each other on the shift
Hi Janet and Hy Jean
But Hy Jean’s gone
Shall wait for none
Disease on ward fifteen
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Luis Rosendo Medel (10/27/2009 11:21:00 PM) Post
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hello, i'm new in this site
and as most of members of here
i try to write poetry, i've written almost only in spanish (my mother tongue)
and now i'm trying to go beyond, i'm studing english philology but i don't have yet a wide knowdlege about rhyme and meter in english. In spanish i can use it quite easy but spanish and english has different structure in phonologic level. So, i hope someone can explain how to make meter in english and also which poetic licenses there are in english.
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Rachel Ellard (10/26/2009 9:54:00 PM) Post
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comment my poems please [3
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