Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop
(12/7/2011 3:02:00 PM)
Liquid diamond...damn it, sleep on my mind.....
(11/29/2011 2:08:00 PM)
Hey Members...I would like you to read my poems and would appreciate any and
all comments you may have...thanks...
Buddy Bee Anthony
(11/21/2011 9:20:00 AM)
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This phrase went through my head and i wrote it down.
Can you see the road map of life written on my face,
or the tatoo's which spring hot from my insides?
(11/10/2011 12:46:00 AM)
I love monorhyming quatrain from my point of view.
They call it Shairi Quatrain whose form is never new.
Trying to create some variations for poetic life lovers like you,
I hope someday their writers and readers will not be only a few.
Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo)
(11/5/2011 6:58:00 AM)
Ralph The Elf
(10/22/2011 4:54:00 PM)
Tears filled her eyes as she spake
overcome with the gruesome memories
goosebumps did her words awake
the tales made our guts go wobbly
whether myth or tale
we did not bother to query
because lie as she may
those were the stories of our grandma Maggie
Samantha De Vera
(10/20/2011 12:43:00 PM)
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Just wanted to share a poem to see what people thought :)
A shadow looms overhead, blanketing the ground
people look up in terror, running around
Fearing what they don't know, they fight
Piercing arrows through the heart, midflight
The beast falls to the hard earth
Remembering all of her mother's warnings at birth
She lies there motionless, tears on her cheeks
Waiting, trying to find the peace she seeks
But no light she finds in the night
So she lies there, cold, until the morning lightReplies for this message:
(10/11/2011 2:08:00 AM)
Hey guys, would love you to dropp me an honest comment on my poetry and i'll do the same for you.
http: //www.poemhunter.com/isunge-mwangase/ here is something I wrote yesterday called 'My Heart Crashed With The
My heart crashed with the
Loving you is the greatest sin,
Because the wages of it is my
You made my soul leave the
Only now I see the stage clear,
Your heart has always been its
I crack with such a pain,
Like a land that has never
But I will go without a fight
For your happiness is my
(9/1/2011 12:45:00 AM)
please comment on how I can improve my future works and you can find my previous works here:
Best Regards and take care everyone!
(7/31/2011 11:48:00 AM)
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this is a song/poem I wrote, I would like comments on improvement, ideas on how to make this a song, changes in lyric suggestions.
I'm bad, I'm a develishy slimy man,
with wicked and vile intentions,
and a infernal and hellish plan.
Corruptive and pervasive, and all together sick,
unholy and despicable with ugly hellish wit.
A genius in sheep's clothing, a devil in disguise,
my words are sweet as honey but I'm planning your demise.
You'll never see it coming, in your mind I'm your best friend,
Like adding sugar to a meal, it'll taste sweeter in the end.
I'll see your face in shock,
that I would have stabbed you so,
I'll grin a evil grin and stare into your soul.
you'll finally breath your last breath,
it will fill me with such joy; to know that you never knew
that you where simply just my toy.