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  • Rookie Boon Ang (5/12/2010 3:20:00 AM) Post reply
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    Heaven can wait

    Imagining how things will go,
    Right at the very end.
    I hope it's hot; I hate the cold
    And working with my hands.

    I would love to float on clouds,
    Look down upon the world.
    Just hope the harps are not too loud,
    Cause string ensembles make me hurl.

  • Rookie Alexander Mcguire (4/27/2010 8:32:00 PM) Post reply

    Im writing this post its my very first
    A joke it is niether nor is it rehearsed
    i dont really try to find words that rhyme
    but flow like rivers that fall from the sky
    who cares if its truth
    who cares if its lies
    u think that ill care about stupid replys
    it crys like the ocean
    floats like dung
    emotion is joking
    and still so much fun

  • Rookie - 3 Points Trade Martin (4/15/2010 8:07:00 PM) Post reply

    “VENTRILOQUIST SEEKS NEW PROSPECTS”


    Yes, I’m sorry to say……..,
    That my ventriloquist……..,
    Suddenly dumped my account……,
    So I’ve been very saddened…….,
    And taken by surprise......,
    By this abrupt action…….,
    (Everyone knows how much I needed him) ……,
    But now I’ve discovered…….,
    The fact the he’s soliciting…….,
    The White House……..,
    For possible retirees (new accounts) ……..,
    Who don’t want the negative stigma…….,
    Of getting badly beaten in November…….! ! !

    …..Trade Martin,2010.

    Copyright 2010 Trade Martin Music, Inc.
    Innovation Digital Of America.
    All rights reserved. International copyright secured
    WWW.TRADEMARTINMUSIC.COM

  • Rookie Patrice Lapeyre (4/15/2010 5:56:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I've been looking for a cogent word other than kiss (of course) rhyming with Balkis in English or French. I'm a new member but an old hand at poem crafting. Lending me a useful one would be a welcome gift into this revered community.

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    • Rookie Trade Martin (4/15/2010 8:05:00 PM) Post reply

      May I suggest 'tenderness' or 'emptiness'...., of course there are a number of others like the 'previous'.....! ! !

  • Rookie Bryandominic Chidiebere (4/8/2010 2:39:00 PM) Post reply

    Greetings to you. Well, I must say that we are carious and cariousity keep leading us down new paths. Who will answer this qestion? . Do you write to have fun and pleature or do you write to make fund? . Help me out, through which means do you post your poems. I have many and how do you get your published. please e-mail me (zemarc91@yahoo.com) . Thanks

  • Rookie Bryandominic Chidiebere (4/8/2010 2:38:00 PM) Post reply

    Greetings to you. Well, I must say that we are carious and cariousity keep leading us down new paths. Who will answer this qestion? . Do you write to have fun and pleature or do you write to make fund? . Help me out, through which means do you post your poems. I have many and how do you get your published. please e-mail me (zemarc91@yahoo.com) . Thanks

  • Rookie - 19 Points Dr. Yogesh Sharma (4/7/2010 5:18:00 PM) Post reply

    Dear, read my poems as and when you can spare some time from your busy schedule to see the real, ugly and, fascist face of the world. Kindly comment and vote on A Prayer For NEW YEAR, Life Imprisoned, Multicultural Liberated Family, Republic Day Parade, True Love.

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    With warm regards and good wishes,

    Dr. Yogesh Sharma

  • Rookie Nick Jordan (3/31/2010 5:17:00 PM) Post reply

    Please my horror poem 'The Room'. I changed quite a bit of the piece for a better flow. Any comments and/or ratings would be appreciated, and I will be sure to do the same for you. Thanks!

  • Rookie Gerald Sedillo (3/22/2010 5:13:00 PM) Post reply

    I feel that too many people use rhyme like a blunt object, flailing madly and in their own process destroying the poem they are trying to make. People should consider muting the rhyme with enjambing of the lines and removing end-stop lines from the areas to be rhymed. Too many AABB rhyme schemes out there. It hurts...

  • Rookie Robin Eriksson (3/21/2010 3:04:00 AM) Post reply

    mine rims a bit check them out =)

    http: //www.freshmensadjustments.blogspot.com/

    follow me and every day i will post new stuffs i hope you people can get insperation from this ^^

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