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  • Rookie Julius Luke Victorio (10/15/2008 4:24:00 PM) Post reply
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    Hello everyone!
    I've just started Poem Hunter today, from a recommendation from my friend, and I've recently just written in 2 poems. I am looking to improve my ideas and writings, and I am free to any critisism. Please look over my profile and poems and see for yourself what I need to correct! .... please?

  • Rookie Albert Wong (10/12/2008 12:22:00 AM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    Relating how to write a correct sonnet at nowadays. Who can tell this exactly what should be followed or in what forms must be used? There are many forms have been talked in the past. I know it consists totally 14 lines A(4,4,4,2): B(4,4,2,2,2) or C(8,6) and rhymes mostly uses B type abba abba + cd, cd, cd (=14 lines) . But, there are really many styles were used in the past centuries. It nearly no fixed regulation at all. The B style is more popular until now.
    I want to hear your opinion....

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    • Rookie Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/13/2008 10:54:00 AM) Post reply

      TM gave me an idea-How about we start the AMERICAN SONNET with our own set of rules and format? AA[BB[CC[DD[FF, GG all the lines in couplets with the last two lines in summation or AB[AB[CD[CD[EF[EF[G ... more

    • Rookie Trade Martin (10/12/2008 2:20:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Albert. I say just forget the various silly rules...., be innovative..., set your own sonnet format...., the Wong sonnet. Who cares....? ? ? This is not a test or a job related to a college course you ... more

    • Rookie Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/12/2008 10:52:00 AM) Post reply

      You can find a really good article on Wikipedia about sonnet formation.The only problem I had with Sonnet: To a Sailor was the fact I could not rhyme two of the words, that's why I said it wasn't a tr ... more

    • Rookie Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/12/2008 8:22:00 AM) Post reply

      I've written several sonnets(sonnet mean ... more

  • Rookie - 20 Points Ron Schmidt (10/7/2008 11:46:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi everyone, Just thought I'd say that I never read many poems until my granddaughter who is 10 needs to read poetry as an assignment in school and that's how I came to the Poemhunter site to try and help her. I have never written any poems in my life but found it to be very satisfying to actually write a few, now I feel like emersing myself in words. I always thought that poetry had to rhyme but after reading several from other poets I find that freeform is very intense. But I hope you enjoy mine as I continue to evolve. Thanks. Ron

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    • Rookie - 20 Points Trade Martin (10/10/2008 8:34:00 PM) Post reply

      Ronald, WELCOME...., you'll also find that some 'so-called' poems make no sense, are not punctuated properly, lack rhythm and contain spelling errors. There seems to be no rules here, we all utilize ' ... more

  • Rookie Egi David Perdana (10/7/2008 3:17:00 AM) Post reply

    http: //poemhunter.com/egi-david-perdana-lyricist-poet/

    please comment my poems and I will comment you poems

  • Rookie Martin Swords (10/2/2008 10:34:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi R&R Workshoppers Most of what I write does not follow strict

    traditional formats, I tend to focus on imagery, word creation,

    and internal Rhythm and movement within the text.

    However one of my poems - 'It's Better With the Good Eye ' - is a

    Villanelle, and I was very happy with how it worked, although I found writing

    strict rules was difficult. I don't like strict forms, sonnets etc. easy, and

    feel that image and wonder suffer at the hand of form.

    All the more respect therefore to Shakespeare and the others who succeeded.

    All comments welcome.

    Thank You All.

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    • Rookie Tulsi Hanumanthu (10/4/2008 4:53:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      I disagree with your statement that 'image and wonder suffer at the hand of form' A true poet is he who DOES NOT LET image and wonder suffer at the hand of form. Content sans Form is as bad as Form s ... more

  • Rookie Albert Wong (10/1/2008 1:35:00 PM) Post reply

    Someone said poems don't need rhymes, yes that right? That means only Lyrics and sonnet etc..need rhymes, because they are for singing, nevertheless the poems for simple reading, memo in the souls.  C h o w i n g   i n   y o u r   h e a r t 。

  • Gold Star - 5,611 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/27/2008 3:11:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi everyone.I recently won the name the title contest sponsored by Trade Martin and I just got my B.B.King Tibute CD. The title is Dark Light, Inside Out for Trade Martin's poem.Yesterday I submitted my narrative romance lyrical poem The Poet and the Musician on PoemHunter.Let me know what you think about my poetry.Thanks.

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    • Gold Star - 5,611 Points Trade Martin (9/28/2008 3:46:00 PM) Post reply

      It's very well done Lorraine...., everyone should try their best to read it....! ! ! Regards, Trade.

  • Gold Star - 5,611 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/21/2008 5:31:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Almost all of my poetry-life I have written traditional verse following the guidlines of the traditionalists originators.I put alot of work in my poetry as these lines do not pour out of me in refined finished form.I write about anything that catches my Muse's fancy and I hope to inspire you when you read my poems.The two great things that mark a real poet is to inspire some else to write creatively and to make someone say 'I wish I had written that poem'.Best wishes to all who like to write in the lyrical style.

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    • Gold Star - 5,611 Points Tulsi Hanumanthu (9/26/2008 2:06:00 AM) Post reply

      I agree with you wholeheartedly. Let me add: POESY'S PARENTS (A Tanka) CONTENT can't conceive POETRY all by herself, Being a maiden. She therefore must marry FORM To beget POEM offspring ... more

  • Rookie Albert Wong (9/17/2008 9:20:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    What are the importance and the points on the sentences?

    Would you tell me any hints on the Rhythm? What that mean on them? Are there in each sentence needs jumping sound like a horse? I need the opinion and hints about this topic.

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  • Rookie William Luo (9/13/2008 7:12:00 PM) Post reply

    i love rhyming in my poems, its my favorite factor to make a dull page meaningful. check out my page and poems and leave some comments ^^

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