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  • Adam Mcdonald (6/28/2013 6:41:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    My sister just discovered she was pregnant and all it took was a little line to chang her life.

    ~Little lines~
    One little line defines a life.
    One little line cuts like a knife
    One little line thats all it takes
    One little line can raise your stakes

    Two little lines can change a life.
    Two little lines can take a life.
    Two little lines, thats all it takes.
    Two little lines can pinpoint lifes mistakes

    Three little lines dont determin much.
    All except who have the touch.
    Three little lines dont make a fuss.
    Three little lines they arent that rough.

    Four little lines can make a square.
    Four little lines for equal shares.
    Four little lines define the road.
    Four little lines set the tone.

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  • Jan Sand (6/13/2013 9:55:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    MISTRESS’S FAREWELL

    Have you ever seen a lady with fried chicken in her hair?

    Or slept with thirty seagulls in very deep despair?

    Have you witnessed glowing sunsets while hanging by your teeth

    From a thirty meter tree with hungry roaches underneath?

    Have you thrilled to singing waffles doused in motor oil

    While demented chimpanzees wrapped your feet in metal foil?

    Have you soared above the Andes supported by umbrellas

    Lifted to the zenith by four thousand farting fellahs?

    Or wandered on the shores

    Of the far away Azores

    While your ears were gently trembled

    By the most persistent snores

    Of a somnolent tarantula

    In stylish striped plus fours?

    If so, there is little I can add to your life.

    You had better leave me now and go back to your wife.

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  • Mohammad Tabatabaei (5/25/2013 4:20:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi
    I am not a native English speaker and not in a position to criticize anyone but just asking: Do your rhymes match together?

  • Mohammad Tabatabaei (5/25/2013 4:09:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi
    I liked the way you chose your rhymes. good luck.

  • Roger Horsch (5/16/2013 1:44:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Deer Hunters' Camp

    It's another year of Deer Hunters' Camp
    Where my friend Tom caught fire while igniting his lamp.
    He screamed, 'Put me out! ' as he ran out of sight.
    I yelled, 'Stop, drop and Roll... and you'll be alright! '
    Then there was Greg, who loved to get drunk.
    He passed out in his tent, while hugging a skunk.
    Him stinking so bad, it must have been hell.
    So, we kept him down wind because of the smell.
    Now here comes Bill, who brought us a treat.
    He fed us all jerky that smelled just like feet.
    We about beat him to death with a bag full of rocks
    ‘Cause, it wasn't deer jerky, it was hard crusty socks.
    We hunted all week without any luck
    Then what came into camp was the world's largest buck.
    We looked at each other, beaten and tired
    Then pointed our guns, but nobody fired.
    We seemed to go through this year after year
    And I'm never amazed why we haven't got deer.
    When we all get together, the deer is the champ
    But, there's always next year at Deer Hunters' Camp.

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    • Tom L (6/5/2013 10:25:00 AM) Post reply

      I like that. Good work.

    • ..... W@king Up..... (6/2/2013 1:15:00 AM) Post reply

      A funny and well thought-out poem :) Funny at times With wonderful rhymes, And vivid expression throughout! Thanks for this :)

  • Roger Horsch (5/15/2013 12:53:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Flying Raisins
    By Roger Horsch

    Flying raisins are in the air, there are flying raisins everywhere
    I see them flying all around, I see them landing on the ground
    I wish they would just go away, but they’ll just come back another day
    I see them flying in the sky, I see them getting in my pie
    I see them walking on my cake, I see them in everything I make
    I wish they would just go away, but they’ll just come back another day
    I find them in my cookie dough, I don’t know why they just won’t go
    I do not like them can’t you see, flying raisins are all over me
    I don’t know where they come from, I just want them to leave
    There’s three or four more on my shirt, and two more on my sleeve
    Then I saw the open box, sitting high upon the rack
    I pulled it down then turned it around, it said “ CAUTION “ on the back
    It said not for use in cooking, such as cookies, cakes or pies
    For I thought I bought a box of raisins, but they were laboratory flies

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    • Donnaj York (5/15/2013 11:26:00 PM) Post reply

      Ahhhhh....until the last line, I thought you may be on the east coast USA, experiencing the 17-year Cicadas.

  • Thomas Worthington (5/13/2013 5:52:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Humpty Dumpty sat on his wall
    and then the shoe came flying.
    It smashed his shell when he hit the floor
    and Humpty started dying

    When the horse came,
    he stood and laughed.
    because in Humpty's innards
    the rodents bathed

    When Mother Hen came
    She tried a repair.
    Sadly she was to late,
    she realised in despair.

    then Mother Hen
    began to rage.
    He was the only egg
    she had ever laid

    and in her rage,
    she flapped her wings
    and with tears in her eyes
    she began to sing

    'I will have your head
    and then I will laugh.
    because it will be your innards
    in which the rodents will bath'

    the mother flew fast,
    As high as the clouds.
    she posed as a torpedo
    and came dive bombing down.

    the horse laughed louder
    'what can you do?'
    and into his skull
    the mother dropped through

    covered in blood,
    she landed and laughed
    'come here little rodents,
    I made you a bath'

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    • Imelda Ortega Suzara (6/12/2013 8:04:00 AM) Post reply

      This is a twisted version of a nursery rhyme with some disgusting images that a child would be horrified by!

  • Duncan Livingstone (5/1/2013 4:53:00 AM) Post reply

    Good poets are not learned poets
    Learned poets are also good poets
    Poor poets pose primitively

  • Jackie Gillis (4/20/2013 9:01:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I am Ice

    I am Ice
    I come in all forms
    I mold into what people want
    I crack under people’s feet

    I am Ice
    Sometimes I’m cold to the touch
    Sometimes I boil with rage
    Sometime I just want to melt away

    I am Ice
    You are fire
    You bring the heat
    You make me nothing

    I am Ice
    Know me as a snowflake
    Know me as an Ice wall
    Know me as the Ice queen

    Know me; for I am Ice

    Written By Jackie Gillis

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  • Ankita Mitra (4/19/2013 7:33:00 AM) Post reply

    Friends by Ankita

    Such a little word, but means a lot..!
    If you don't have one, then what you've got?

    Starts with fighting, ends in being friends,
    Its is the friendship, which has no end..!

    Having friends, is a real pleasure!
    If you have one/them, you have real treasure!

    They wipe out our tears,
    They kick out our fears,
    When they insisted to get disappear,
    we found heaven no near, ,
    Hence, concept of hell becomes clear...


    They care for us,
    Weather we are fine or weak..!
    They fix our broken heart,
    Like a fevi quick..!

    Friends may scatter,
    sometimes distance never matter..!
    Memories all over the heart,
    Nowhere feels like we are apart..!

    Still can smell the tiffin you used to bought,
    Still can visualize the fight we once fought,
    Still smile on the joke you once cracked,
    Still have the rapper you gave me packed, ,

    You wanna hear some more??
    Then i will say how much i still adore(you) ..!

    Friends are the most lively part of me,
    Hope same for you guys too.
    Junk jeweleries are everywhere,
    Diamond jeweleries are few.

    confused??Okay.. listen closely!
    Fake friends are everywhere,
    True friends are few.

    This poem should have no end,
    Thats what my heart says!
    I better say, this poem owes to you my friends,
    As I hate to pretend...! :)



    @nky

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