Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop
(5/6/2012 12:08:00 PM)
Nice poem. However, check spelling " you're out of reach, " every way-two words, surprise with an s, hold you close and, yes, you know.
Ralph The Elf
(4/22/2012 3:07:00 AM)
if this is real then let her know
you only lose if you don't show
your love and care and for the maiden
that makes you feel like a baby
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Like a soldier's hard-earned stripes, his cuts
run across his arms, their raised shine standing out.
I am mesmerized by ...