Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop
Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan
(10/8/2012 2:27:00 PM)
Hmmm! Wonderful write. Great work. I love all the lines.
(10/5/2012 3:07:00 AM)
wow! ! you are awesome.. you're great.. i just wonder who is your inspiration =))
(9/25/2012 11:08:00 AM)
Saundra, this poem is cleverly written
" Hiding behind a facade, nothing is as it seems.
Lost in an illusion and caught up in a dream. " I love these two lines especially. Great write!
Comment of the Day
- It's more of a song lyric.
Please let me know how I can improve it.
Changing words etc,
Thanks in advice!
The winter is ...