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  • Michael Shepherd (8/14/2005 3:06:00 PM) Post reply

    Rather than launch into a spiel about why it's 'unsuccessful' by my reading, a question: is this meant to be a celebration of St Francis? a wry account of the failure to do so? or a satire on the TV industry? or...?

  • Ann Spencer (8/14/2005 2:23:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Is this Forum where we come for criticism? If it is please can somebody comment on my poem 'Fantasia For Francis'?

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    • Max Reif (8/14/2005 3:30:00 PM) Post reply

      Dear Ann, I read your poem twice. The second time I felt I was starting to get my bearings. I think it IS a satire on Disney & co's need to romantacize everything. St. Francis' life is perhaps one o ... more

  • Poetry Snob (aka Jefferson Carter) (8/14/2005 11:33:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Maty, I just read your poem 'Justice.' To use Michael's tactful term, its quite unsuccessful. Its ungraceful, sounds murky, and the whole metaphorical structure does little more than over-complicate a simple idea. AND your spelling is really bad, so bad it makes it hard to even begin the poem. Dont worry about copyrighting your poems, you should worry about mastering the basics of a successful poem first. Read some good contemporary poets NOW! Id suggest someone like Billy Collins, who is graceful, deceptively simple on the surface, but complex underneath. Good luck. Snob

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    • Lamont Palmer Rookie - 1st Stage (8/15/2005 1:12:00 AM) Post reply

      Snob, I can assure you, I am no one other than Lamont Palmer. My ego would not allow me to masquerade as someone else; not even for laughs.

    • Herbert Nehrlich1 Rookie - 1st Stage (8/14/2005 6:19:00 PM) Post reply

      I struggled through the poem Justice (some of the spelling must have been fixed) and see a real possibility to turn this into a great poem. I think the author lost track of his thoughts somewhere in ... more

  • Michael Shepherd (8/14/2005 10:45:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Right, class, back to your desks and pay attention, put those snaps of your Poetry Camp away especially the one you're all sniggering over, and you can take that 'whatever' expression off your face right now, Kolb...

    Have you all read the Hartman book on Free Verse: the Prosody of? I guess you teachers have. It's not deckchair reading - I've given it two afternoons and I'm only up to page 40 of towards 200... it's the sort of book that you need to read if only to find out what someone else (of the few) has made of the territory. It's a scrupulous piece of academics, but if I tell you that Chapter 2 is entitled 'Accentualism, Isochrony, Musical Fallacy'...? There are times when Hartman, bless his little cotton intentions, seems the least appropriate person to take on the job, but hey, someone had to... and he totally disqualifies himself in my eyes/ears, since I wonder if he's ever written verse himself, or talked about what he's talking about, to an actor...nevertheless, essential reading, I'd say, if only to clear the air a bit. He does dispel some loose thinking about metered v. rhythmic v. 'free'. And the bibliography of 110 items could spiral my Amazonian forest of debt... So ipods off, you there, and take out your electronic notebooks...and no, I won't precis it for you, you lazy laid-backs...

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    • Max Reif Rookie - 1st Stage (8/14/2005 11:48:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      I just broke down & ordered the book last night. The library wanted &5 to process an interlibrary loan, and I could buy it for 10 without leaving home. Those chapter titles are scary, though, Michael ... more

  • Maty Grosman (8/14/2005 12:11:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    I wouldn't like to take part in any of your personal disputes...
    My only concern is not to find my work, or bits of it, scattered around the web under different names.

    It is a general concern and not related personally to anyone (I hope it won't be..)
    As for your personal affairs, I must admit that as a new member, I find rather amusing then discouraging. But, as I said, that is none of my business.


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    • Michael Shepherd Rookie - 1st Stage (8/14/2005 6:18:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Sorry, hadn't read your previous post about copyright.

    • Michael Shepherd Rookie - 1st Stage (8/14/2005 5:46:00 AM) Post reply

      Maty matey, I don't blame you... and of course it's your business if you want to make it that... but I'm puzzled about 'scattered around the web'. Maybe I misunderstand you; but multiple tags and pe ... more

  • allan james saywell (8/13/2005 11:01:00 PM) Post reply

    i dont know maty we cant even protect it from lunatics

  • Maty Grosman (8/13/2005 9:21:00 PM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    Does anyone know if this site is copyright protected?

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    • Maty Grosman Rookie - 1st Stage (8/14/2005 10:33:00 AM) Post reply

      Thank you both for the information.

    • Michael Shepherd Rookie - 1st Stage (8/14/2005 6:07:00 AM) Post reply

      Maty, there's a rubric on this in the Help! section, saying you still hold it. But of course that doesn't mean they would defend it themselves?

    • Max Reif Rookie - 1st Stage (8/13/2005 11:41:00 PM) Post reply

      Dear Maty, My understanding is that if a writer identifies his/her work by putting the copyright symbol, a c with a circle around it-or I think just writing out the words 'copyright 2005 (or whateve ... more

  • Max Reif (8/13/2005 9:16:00 AM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    All's I can say is, I'm glad you guys like to have fun, when you're not viciously slamming one another!

    (And I'd *wondered* what a Poetry Slam was!) : -)

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    • Michael Shepherd Rookie - 1st Stage (8/14/2005 6:05:00 AM) Post reply

      We're into 'laugh-at-yourself' therapy, MAx... just the thought of a rumble in the jungle did it... who know, it might even improve some people's po.... oh never mind...

    • Michael Shepherd Rookie - 1st Stage (8/13/2005 10:58:00 AM) Post reply

      You said it, Gonzilla...

    • Michael Shepherd Rookie - 1st Stage (8/13/2005 10:23:00 AM) Post reply

      Remember the quote from Dame Edith Sitwell - 'COSY? ! Cosy as a nest of vipers...'

  • Max Reif (8/12/2005 10:27:00 PM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    Here's the place I booked, with a separate room for Lamont. resortID=78&name=Fairfield_Berkshires_at_Bentley_Brook_Mountain_Club

    Do you think we need something more rustic?

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  • Max Reif (8/12/2005 6:20:00 PM) Post reply | Read 5 replies

    My wife says we should all go for a retreat together in some New England woods, and rent a writer's cottage.
    Wait minute...
    By a lake, she says...
    & some wood.
    What say?

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