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  • Rajesh Thankappan (5/10/2013 11:37:00 AM) Post reply

    Dear Friends, Please read my poems and post your valuable comments. I am looking forward to hear from you.

  • Abdu Musa (5/8/2013 7:55:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi all

    It is recently that I started posting here. You know what I felt then?Here is my feeling:

    'A Little Prospect

    I was here to let my emotion go out
    Through the the pipe of poetry art
    So, I started hitting the keyboard
    But, as reluctant was my mind,
    Nothing happened except a little prospect.'


    You may say, 'So what?'. Here is my replay: I am just humbly asking you to look at my poems and have your say. I badly need your help. So, tell me what I should do to improve them.

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    • Vicki Cherney (5/12/2013 3:16:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Hi, Abu- I would say the best thing you could do for your poetry, if you want to write in English, is to continue to study the language. It's great that you already write as well as you do! As ... more

  • Olagunju Samuel (5/7/2013 10:56:00 PM) Post reply

    Please anyone wit analysis of nightfall in soweto

  • Dog God 8hate (5/7/2013 3:45:00 PM) Post reply

    but sorry

    truly barbed axes could strike
    no virtue could quell
    ghastly prowess o' fuming goDs
    careless thought incurs
    images wrought beyond
    my guileless sin defers

    less than little
    my nil to none...
    i'm a goat herder
    who pets sheep
    if the wool
    is dirty but
    I wash my hands
    first, but only once
    a long time ago

    but... sorry

    dg

    .

  • Dog God 8hate (5/7/2013 10:52:00 AM) Post reply

    Heisted

    Momentary demons
    they do arise, too
    unyielding paths...

    peppered-roads to perdition
    they offer no turn!
    not 'til notable disputes
    froth-fury
    then permutate...
    and to gauged rewards
    that more proficient taste
    portions beyond past
    and... naive meals

    gd

    .

  • Jordan E (5/6/2013 4:18:00 PM) Post reply

    hi there, i've got some dark poetry for you guys.i just want to be estabilished, go on amazon and its called 'Jet to the shadows', and its on kindle, and buy it.Tell your friends

  • Ray Hart (5/3/2013 9:04:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi all,
    I've posted three poems recently you might like a read. If theres something you don't understand just ask. We can be different in Australia.

  • Jordan E (5/2/2013 9:03:00 AM) Post reply

    hello, can you guys check out a poem book called 'Jet to the Shadows' on kindle? tell your friends. its a excellent read.

  • Jackie Liles (5/1/2013 5:53:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    I'm searching for a poem that has the words " My life I carry in a leaky pail" .
    Can anyone help me with finding the name of this poem and who it was written by?
    Thanks

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    • Donnaj York (5/2/2013 9:52:00 PM) Post reply

      I googled the poem you're looking for, and did find a lot of websites that it should be in, but never found that poem. Apparently a lot of people have written about leaky buckets, leaky pails, leaky ... more

    • Angie Gunnell (5/1/2013 2:57:00 PM) Post reply

      I googled that line and came up with a site very easily...of course, you'd have to sift through the site to find the poem...and since you are the one needing it, I think you should do the work.

  • Rabia Nadeem (4/30/2013 5:30:00 AM) Post reply

    http://poemhunter.com/poem/the-lament-of-a-bird/
    i would like you to comment this poem of mine please :)

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