Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(5/10/2013 11:37:00 AM)
Dear Friends, Please read my poems and post your valuable comments. I am looking forward to hear from you.
(5/8/2013 7:55:00 AM)
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It is recently that I started posting here. You know what I felt then?Here is my feeling:
'A Little Prospect
I was here to let my emotion go out
Through the the pipe of poetry art
So, I started hitting the keyboard
But, as reluctant was my mind,
Nothing happened except a little prospect.'
You may say, 'So what?'. Here is my replay: I am just humbly asking you to look at my poems and have your say. I badly need your help. So, tell me what I should do to improve them.
(5/7/2013 10:56:00 PM)
Please anyone wit analysis of nightfall in soweto
Dog God 8hate
(5/7/2013 3:45:00 PM)
truly barbed axes could strike
no virtue could quell
ghastly prowess o' fuming goDs
careless thought incurs
images wrought beyond
my guileless sin defers
less than little
my nil to none...
i'm a goat herder
who pets sheep
if the wool
is dirty but
I wash my hands
first, but only once
a long time ago
Dog God 8hate
(5/7/2013 10:52:00 AM)
they do arise, too
peppered-roads to perdition
they offer no turn!
not 'til notable disputes
and to gauged rewards
that more proficient taste
portions beyond past
and... naive meals
(5/6/2013 4:18:00 PM)
hi there, i've got some dark poetry for you guys.i just want to be estabilished, go on amazon and its called 'Jet to the shadows', and its on kindle, and buy it.Tell your friends
(5/3/2013 9:04:00 PM)
I've posted three poems recently you might like a read. If theres something you don't understand just ask. We can be different in Australia.
(5/2/2013 9:03:00 AM)
hello, can you guys check out a poem book called 'Jet to the Shadows' on kindle? tell your friends. its a excellent read.
(5/1/2013 5:53:00 AM)
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I'm searching for a poem that has the words " My life I carry in a leaky pail" .
Can anyone help me with finding the name of this poem and who it was written by?
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(5/2/2013 9:52:00 PM)
I googled the poem you're looking for, and did find a lot of websites that it should be in, but never found that poem. Apparently a lot of people have written about leaky buckets, leaky pails, leaky ... more
(5/1/2013 2:57:00 PM)
I googled that line and came up with a site very easily...of course, you'd have to sift through the site to find the poem...and since you are the one needing it, I think you should do the work.
- Donnaj York (5/2/2013 9:52:00 PM) Post reply
(4/30/2013 5:30:00 AM)
i would like you to comment this poem of mine please :)
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