Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(5/8/2005 6:24:00 AM)
I kind of like this one. The blade represents danger and possibly suicide, but he is spinning it to supposedly find answers. It's not terribly witty but the end made me smile a little. At least it's not another drunken lashing out poem, which made him turn into a charicature of himself.
Comment of the Day
Like a soldier's hard-earned stripes, his cuts
run across his arms, their raised shine standing out.
I am mesmerized by ...